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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 20, 2009 16:37:09 GMT -5
Nice chapter its getting good that stoped elevator my slow them down. But they are da Toon Patrol they will find a way of fast I can see now.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 21, 2009 5:50:58 GMT -5
Thanx.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 21, 2009 15:23:47 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey.
Yup, I'm sure they'll figure something out somehow.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 22, 2009 15:39:38 GMT -5
Chapter: 27
Maria and the rest that wanted to come finally made it upstairs.
"Whew, man, I thought we would never made it." said Banzai.
"SHUSH! I hear something." said Maria.
Maria crepted quietly to see where it was coming from. She was surprised when she saw Br'er Fox and Bear. Shelbi followed, she puzzled when she saw them as well.
"What are they doing here?" Shelbi asked.
Br'er Fox was swinging the rugwrinch side to side. Maria narrowed her eyes and then she growled under her breath.
"They probably work for Br'er." said Maria.
"And maybe the guy's are still at the elevator." said Shelbi.
Maria backed away a little bit, while Shelbi looked at her. She stopped, she began to transform into a hyena, and ran towards them. Br'er Fox still was laughing, but he then stop when he saw a hyena, not realizing it was Maria.
"Hy-hy-hy-." Br'er said, as he was terrified.
"Well, HIIIII, to you to." said Maria, then she began to bite his leg.
He screamed in pain, while Br'er bear was just standing there doing nothing but staring.
"Dont just stand there, do something." said Br'er Fox.
Maria growled at him, a sign that tells him that he better back away. Br'er bear turned the other way and ran. But then he was surrounded by Shenzi, Banzai, and Ed, who too was growling. As Maria let go, Br'er Fox backed away from her and the hyenas circled them.
"You guy's stay here and watch them, Shelbi, Curly, and Techna go to where the elevator is and help Techna, while I go and stop Br'er." said Maria, before she transformed back into herself.
They all nodded, and they did as they were told. Maria ran to where the mayors office is and she found Br'er, but boy did he chose the wrong person to mess with.
"BR'ER!!!" Maria yelled, then transformed into a black wolf and pounced on Br'er.
Meanwhile, the Toon Patrol and whats left of the others were still there waiting in the dark.
"RECOUNT!!!." said Vanessa and Psycho in unison.
"*sighed* I told you I ALREADY WON MARCO POLLO!!!" Wheezy yelled.
"RECOUNT!!!" they said it again.
"Will you two STOP IT! Look this isn't helping much you know." said Vidia.
"Yeah, we shouldn't have come with Maria." said Latoyah.
"Well, what are you gonna do?" Gary said.
"Uh, Noah, this isn't the right time to start hugging me close to you while your hands are in my waist." said Vanessa.
"Im over here." said Noah.
"Sorry." said Psycho.
Vanessa punched him at the nose, but accidently punched her uncle.
"OW, WHAT WAS THAT FOR?!?" Red asked.
"That was for.....you know what I have no clue I meant to punch Psycho but I wanted to punch you, I don't know why?" Vanessa said.
Kenny hid his face to Juarez shoulder, still frighted by what happened. Juarez nuzzled him.
"Whatever happens, I hope Maria makes it and those guy's figure out to get us out." said Smartguy.
Meanwhile, Maria began to growl. Br'er was scared when he saw the size of her teeth. The mayor, name Clockwise, who is a toon rounded clock who wore a high hat, a suit, some shoes with spats, and a ribbon saying "Mayor of ToonTown" came to them and seperate then before she does something.
"Whoah, what in the toons world is going on?" Clockwise asked.
"He is going to bulldoze the Serengeti." said Maria, before she changed back into herslef again.
"I know, me and him were disgusting that, but Im going to have to say no." said Clockwise.
"Huh?" Maria and Br'er asked in unison.
"Well, after when he told me that, I didn't like the idea." said Clockwise.
"WHAT YOUR SAYING I KILLED HEAVEN, STOLE THE WILL, AND LIED ABOUT IT FOR NOTHING?!?" Br'er asked, but then he shut his mouth, realizing he had told something he wasn't supposed to.
Clockwise crossed his arms at him and Maria narrowed her eyes at him. He ran out of the office, but then saw Shenzi, Banzai, Ed, and Killer growling and snarling at him. He turned to see Br'er Fox and Bear.
"We tried." said Br'er Fox.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 22, 2009 17:12:24 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 22, 2009 19:48:32 GMT -5
Br'er is in a lot of trouble now.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 22, 2009 22:47:00 GMT -5
Yes he is I do not think he going to get out of this one
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Post by Fisi on Oct 23, 2009 5:19:55 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 23, 2009 7:29:43 GMT -5
No probelm Your welcome just because Br'er is in a lot of trouble now. I hope the Capters go on don't let it end at city hall please.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 23, 2009 13:11:07 GMT -5
Ok.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 23, 2009 14:27:00 GMT -5
Chapter: 28
Br'er took out his switchblade and began to point it directly to Maria.
"Back off, or she'll get it." said Br'er.
But then, he widen his eyes and screamed in pain when Killer bit Br'er's tail.
"*snicker* Thats my boy." said Banzai.
"Get him OFF!!!" Br'er yelled.
"Not until you tell us where the will is." said Maria.
Meanwhile, Curly, Shelbi, and Techna found the elevator. The elevator wires on the buttons seemed to be unwired. Techna came running towards it, she looks up, and then she turns to Shelbi.
"Ok, pick me up so I can see the wires." said Techna.
Shelbi nodded and picked her up as she was told. Curly just stands there, watching Shelbi before he sighed. Shelbi turned to look at Curly.
"What?" Shelbi asked.
"Oh, uh, nothing." said Curly before he shook his head.
Techna nodded, understanding what happened.
"Ok, I see what happened, they must have take out the wires. We need to put two red and blue wires back." said Techna.
"Found them." Curly said, showing her the wires.
"Perfect." said Techna.
"How can you see the color, aren't dogs supposed to be color blind?" Shelbi asked.
"*nodded* Well, yes, but you see, I can tell which color it is, even if Im color blind." said Techna.
Curly pushed the wires back. Meanwhile, They waited in the elevator, while Red was singing "it's a small world".
"Red, if you don't shut up now, I'm gonna find your stupid grey beard and yank it off." said Vanessa.
But then, the lights were turned on and the elevator was moving. Everyone cheered.
"Duh, looks like it got fix." said Stupid.
"Well, lah-te-dah I guess it is. NO DUH, SHIRLY REALLY?!?" Vanessa asked.
"Its Sherlock, not Shirley." said Smartguy.
Vanessa rolled her eyes. When it made it to the 30th floor, it opened and everyone got out.
"You guy's did it, but how?" Tatiana asked.
"Techna and Curly." said Shelbi.
"C'mon, let's hurry, we gotta go help Maria." said Techna.
They nodded, and they ran in the halls. At the sametime, Killer was still biting his tail, not letting it go, and Banzai biting his leg.
"Tell us now." said Maria.
"Alright, Alright, I'll tell ya." said Br'er.
Banzai and Killer let go. He took out the will, and then he puts one hand ontop of it while the other down, it looked like he is going to rip it. They gasped. Then all of a sudden, Smartguy snatched it behind him.
"I'll take that." said Smartguy.
When he opened the will, he widen his eyes and then he cocked his head to the side.
"This is a fake." said Smartguy.
"WHAT?!?" all of them said it except for Clockwise.
"It just says "Got ya Br'er you Sucker!!" said Smartguy.
"Well, then this is a good time to put you in prison Br'er." said Clockwise.
As he snapped his fingers, two big muscular angry toon human police man came and took Br'er away. Midnight came, and the Toon Patrol, the others, and Eddie and Dolores were in the headquarters, finally together at last . Then, a knock was heard in the door. Smartguy came and opened it. It was Clockwise the mayor.
"Hello, can I make an annoucement." said Clockwise.
Everyone stopped at what they were doing and looked at him.
"*ahem* I like to say that me and my lawyer found the will." said Clockwise.
"Whos your lawyer?" Vanessa asked.
"Uh oh HOTDOG!!!" said the same asian guy from the funeral.
"Oh no, not him." said Greasy.
"Why do he speak like that?" Smartguy asked.
"I don't know, maybe he talks funny." said Juarez.
The mayor turned to Maria and gave her the will.
"Maria, take this will, keep the will safe from anyone." said Clockwise.
Maria smiled and nodded.
"Yaaay AFRICA IS SAVED!!!" said Shenzi.
"So you guys gonna stay?" Noah asked.
"Not me, I wanna go back to Montanna, it's more safer thane here." said Latoyah.
"I wanna stay." said Vidia.
"I have to go back to Austrailia tommorow." said Shelbi.
"WAIT, when you come back do you wanna.....hang out sometime." said Curly.
"You mean, like a date?" Shelbi asked.
He nodded, as an answer to her question. Shelbi smiled at him.
"Well, ok, sure." said Shelbi, before she kissed him on the cheek.
Eddie came to Smartguy, Vanessa pushed him, he began to groan at Vanessa. Maria crossed her arms at him, waiting for him to start.
"Thanks, for rescueing them." said Eddie.
"No prob." said Smartguy.
Kenny came to Smartguy's leg, he picked Kenny up while Juarez came and kissed him on his cheeks. Everything turned out alright for everyone but Br'er. As for sure, it was a the reunion they'll never forget.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 23, 2009 16:49:03 GMT -5
Thanx Spikey. ^_^.
Heaven scammed Br'er cause she didn't like him in the first place.
the Asian lawyer is a reference to the guy name Bobby Lee in MadTv.
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Post by smartguy02011986 on Oct 24, 2009 2:20:08 GMT -5
LoL Thanks for making that the best ending of the story That was The best I ever read even from being back in school
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Post by Fisi on Oct 24, 2009 6:25:55 GMT -5
Thanx Smartguy. ^_^.
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