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Post by Fisi on Sept 28, 2009 10:49:36 GMT -5
Chapter:18
Maria took out her cellphone, she waited for it to pick up. Shelbi and Vanessa stared at her.
"Who are you calling?" Shelbi asked.
"Damien, he can help us, if he picks up the phone." said Maria.
Vanessa looked down, then she looked at her.
"Damien, he isn't your boyfriend anymore." said Vanessa.
"Why?" Maria asked.
"Cause, I saw him the other day with a girl and well I think you know what happened." said Vanessa.
Maria's eyes widen, she then sat on a bucket, and covered her eyes with her hands. They hear her crying and came to her to put their hands on her back.
"It's ok, he's not worth it anyway." said Shelbi.
"Yeah, look on the bright side, now your single." said Vanessa.
Shelbi: All the single ladies, All the single ladies, All the single. Up on the club, just broke up, and doing my own little thing. He decided to dip, and now he wanna trip, cause another brother notice me.
Vanessa:I'm up on him, he was up on me,don't pay him any attention. Cried my tears, for three whole years, and ya can't be mad at me.
Maria smiled and wanted to join in.
Maria:Cause if you like it then you should put a ring on it, if you like it then you should put a ring on it, dont be mad at once he wants it, cause if you like it then you should put a ring on it.
All: Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh.
They all began to giggle. Meanwhile, at the Toon Patrol headquarters Smartguy who was sitting on the couch had Kenny on his lap, Stupid was picking his ear, Psycho's head was on the wall, Wheezy was making out with Vidia in the kitchen, Greasy who was sitting next to Smartguy was watching Clyde and Bonnie playing "Gold Fish", and since the hyenas and Red came to visit the hyenas was watching Red pretending to be Pee-Wee Herman.
"IT'S NOT THE SAME!!" Psycho said before he hit the wall.
"Well Psycho what can we do?, first Br'er owns the Serengeti, Winnie is dead, Vanessa and Maria's house is burned down, and now he's making Jaurez and the others work." said Smartguy.
Kenny sneezed and twitched his nose a little. Their was a knock on the door, Greasy stood up and walked up to the door. When he opened it he saw a brown mink with a pink dress with amber eyes.
"Oh hello, I heard about the two pinked nose kits mother." said the brown mink.
She entered and saw Clyde and Bonnie. She knelt down and rubbed Clydes head.
"The poor things they must have been soo sad about their mother." said the brown mink.
"She creeps me out." Clyde whispered before when she was done rubbing his head.
"And who are you?" Smartguy asked.
"Oh, how silly of me, my name is Tatiana." said Tatiana.
"Hola, my names Greasy, mi amor." Greasy before kissing her hand.
Tatiana giggled, Smartguy sighed, Banzai came to Smartguy.
"Well, that solves it, now how are we supposed to get them back?" Banzai asked.
Smartguy thought for a sec, then he had an idea.
"I got an idea, but we gotta wait till dawn and it involves us, you guy's, and Red." said Smartguy.
"Huh?" Red asked.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 28, 2009 14:50:39 GMT -5
Yup. ^_^.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 28, 2009 16:51:40 GMT -5
Great chapter. ^^
Loved how you put the "Single Ladies" song. ^^
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Post by Fisi on Sept 28, 2009 17:01:03 GMT -5
Thanx.
I made it get out of my head now. I don't know how but I'm glad it out cause I couldn't sleep when I keep hearing that song in my head.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 29, 2009 15:18:14 GMT -5
Chapter:19
When afternoon came, Jaurez walked to her room, and jumped into her bed. Latoyah came in and sat next to Jaurez.
"Whew, I thought that we would never be finish." said Jaurez.
"Well, now you know." said Latoyah.
"*sighed* I miss Smartguy and Kenny." said Jaurez.
Latoyah cocked her head to the side and had her face puzzled.
"Who?" Latoyah asked.
"Oh, I forgot, you don't know them." said Jaurez.
"Maybe, you can tell me." said Latoyah.
Jaurez began explaining to Latoyah about Smartguy and Kenny. After when she was done, Latoyah sighed and looked at her.
"Wow, what a life." said Latoyah.
"Yeah, Smartguy is charming while Kenny is soo adorable." said Jaurez.
"What else about Smartguy?" Latoyah asked.
"He loves me and I love him." said Jaurez.
Latoyah nodded, she walked up to the door, and then look at Jaurez.
"Later, Jaurez, I gotta rest for awhile." Latoyah said before she left.
"Later." said Jaurez.
Br'er, who was listening to their conversation in his room, puts his finger under his chin.
"Hmm, if I can get Jaurez into my hands, then my plan would be working in progress." Br'er said before he did an evil chuckle.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 29, 2009 16:11:24 GMT -5
Br'er is a very good evil villain in this.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 30, 2009 15:42:08 GMT -5
Chapter:20
When dawn came, the Toon Patrol and the others were waiting infront of Br'er's mansion. Stupid was looking out to see if there were any guard dogs.
"Duh, coast is clear." said Stupid.
"Wait a minute, I know this kind of toonish thing, when the coast IS CLEAR I go in and then there is gonna be some guard dogs after me." said Smartguy.
"Well, maybe this time it will be different." said Vidia.
Smartguy rolled his eyes then pass Kenny to Vidia. He checked to see no dog was there. He made a quick relief and turned to them.
"Ok, coast is clear." said Smartguy.
He made a yelped, turned, and saw Killer biting his tail.
"Oh, sorry, thought you were someone else." said Killer.
Smartguy snatched his tail and mumbled something about Killer biting his tail. Banzai ran to Killer and gave him a noogie. As for everyone else they went in and Vidia passed Kenny to Smartguy. They heard a growl, they turned and saw Chiboa.
"Chiboa, did you miss me." Red said before he rubbed Chiboa's head.
"C'mon, let's go before-." Smartguy began.
But then there was a Rottweiler growling at them. They ran, while the dog began chasing after them. The hyenas came and growl at the dog. The Rottweiler did a whimpered then ran off.
"Ok, we found Killer and Chiboa, so now all we have to do is find the others." said Smartguy.
"If your looking for Vanessa and Maria there in the second floor in third room to the left, but if your looking for Jaurez then it's the second room to the right." said Killer.
"Thanks." said Smartguy.
"But wait, Br'er has some video cams around the house, but we don't know where they are hid. Maybe one of you guy's can go to the vent." said Chiboa.
"Duh, what about Clyde and Bonnie?" Stupid asked.
"We would, but can't since we out grown this vent a little." said Clyde.
"Yup." said Bonnie.
"What about Kenny?" Vidia asked.
"WHAT NO WAY!!" Smartguy yelled.
"Look, I know Kenny is too young, but we need him to go to that vent. Killer or Chiboa would do it but they don't have thumbs." said Vidia.
"Thats true." said Killer.
Smartguy sighed, he looked at Kenny, then gave him a hug. Wheezy opened the vent, then they put Kenny in the vent.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 30, 2009 16:59:36 GMT -5
GO KENNY GO!!!!
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Post by Fisi on Oct 1, 2009 15:22:02 GMT -5
Chapter:21
Kenny crawled inside not knowing what he had to do. He felt the coldness in his warm and soft body. He looked side to side to see where he was, he crawled to his right, then stopped when he saw a room. Kenny saw his mother looking like she was depressed.
"Oh, please, if something goods about to happened, please, show me a sign." said Jaurez.
Kenny was so glad he found his mother, he giggled in joy. Until he felt something under his feet. He began to fall, but landed in his mother lap.
"KENNY!!" said Jaurez.
Jaurez began to hug and nuzzled him at the sametime.
"Momma." said Kenny.
Jaurez eyes widen then looked at Kenny with her face puzzled.
"Kenny, did you say momma?" Jaurez asked.
"Momma." said Kenny.
"Oh, Kenny, you said your first word." Jaurez said before she hug him again.
There was a knock on the door. Jaurez turned and looked at it nervous. When it opened, Vanessa came in.
"Hey Jaurez." said Vanessa.
"Vanessa, hey. Don't scare me like that." said Jaurez.
Vanessa eyes widen when she saw Kenny.
"Um, how did Kenny got here?" Vanessa asked.
Jaurez pointed up to where the vent was.
"Oh." said Vanessa.
She passed Kenny to her, she grabbed a blue blanket, then wrapped it around Kenny's body leaving the head out only.
"Put Kenny in your room, I don't want Br'er to see him, or else something bad will happened to him." said Jaurez.
Vanessa nodded then left the room. Jaurez began to wonder "How did Kenny went inside that vent" but then she realized that it was probably the idea of Smartguy. She then put her hand in her arm.
"Please, Smartguy, hurry." said Jaurez.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 1, 2009 17:19:44 GMT -5
Kenny's a smart lil' kit.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 2, 2009 16:25:45 GMT -5
Chapter: 21
Vanessa ran to the hallways still carrying Kenny. As soon as she made it to the door, she knocked on the door.
“Who is it?” Maria asked.
Vanessa rolled her eyes before she grumbled.
“It’s the pizza man, WHO THE HECK YOU THINK IT IS!!” Vanessa yelled.
Maria opened the door, she gasped when she saw Kenny. So she dragged Vanessa in, checked to see if nobody was there, then closed the door and locked it.
“ARE YOU CRAZY? YOU KNOW THAT KENNY ISN’T SUPPSED TO BE HERE!!’’ Maria yelled.
Vanessa passed Kenny to Shelbi, she turned to her and gave her a look.
“YES I KNOW THAT AND NO I’M NOT CRAZY!!’’ Vanessa yelled.
“Then why is he here?’’ Maria asked.
“Cause Juarez had him in her room, so she passed it to me so I can put him here.’’ said Vanessa.
“I can’t believe she trusted you with Kenny, besides remember the time when I left you and Wheezy in charge to hold Kenny and you guys lost him.’’ said Maria.
“That’s only because Wheezy was being an idiot and left Kenny alone, and not to mention Kenny used a box to slide downstairs and he was with you eating a cookie.’’ said Vanessa.
“Wow, that is one smart baby kit.’’ said Shelbi.
Maria sighed; she began to sit on her side of the bed putting her hands on her face and groaned. Meanwhile the Toon Patrol and the others were reviewing about the plan.
“Ok, does everyone get the plan?’’ Smartguy asked.
Everyone nodded.
“Good.’’ said Smartguy.
Stupid came up to the doorbell, pressed it, then he left to the bushes. Br’er opened the door and his face was puzzled. Banzai was disguised as a pizza delivery guy.
“Hey man, got your pizza.’’ said Banzai.
“What? I didn’t ordered any pizza.’’ said Br’er.
“Yeah man, you didn’t, it was probably a girl name Vanessa.’’ Banzai said, while he put on a nervous grin.
“Why did I hired her?’’ Br’er said to himself.
Banzai entered Br’er’s mansion. But he had a suspicious that there was something going on.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 3, 2009 10:19:23 GMT -5
It's ok Spikey.
Kenny is pretty skilled for a baby kit.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 3, 2009 19:43:16 GMT -5
Chapter: 22
Br’er stared at Banzai when he was walking up the stairs. Banzai put the pizza cardboard box down, and then he turned to look at him.
“WHAT? ANIMALS CAN WORK TO MAN!!And besides I get paid.’’ said Banzai, then he pick up the pizza cardboard box.
Br’er looked at him at first then shrugged. Banzai watched as Br’er left. He took off his disguised and opened the cardboard showing Techna and Killer inside.
“Man, that was a good pizza.’’ said Killer.
“Ok, Techna, like Smartguy said, go to that wire over there and bite It.’’ said Banzai.
Techna nodded, she went to the wire and bit the red one. All the video cameras turned off.
“Good, now we need to find Maria, Vanessa, and Shelbi.’’ said Banzai.
“Found them.’’ Killer said, before pointing to the room door.
They went inside the room; Maria smiled widely and hugged Banzai.
“I am so glad that you’re here. Where’s Shenzi and Ed?’’ Maria asked.
“Their fine, Smartguy and the others are coming.’’ said Banzai.
“How did you, Killer, and Techna got in here?’’ Maria asked.
“They hide in the pizza cardboard box, while I disguised myself as a pizza delivery guy and told Br’er that I was “delivering’’ the pizza to Vanessa.’’ said Banzai.
“Why?’’ Vanessa asked.
“But how did you got here before the video cams can spot you?’’ Maria asked.
“Techna bit the red wire to turn off the video cams.’’ said Banzai.
“Still why did you tell Br’er that the pizza was for me, I mean I know that I’m a trouble maker but still why did you have to use me as an excuse to get in.’’ said Vanessa.
Meanwhile, Smartguy disguised himself as a florist and took some roses. When he pressed the doorbell, Br’er opened the door again.
“Ah, the florist, I see you finally arrived with those roses.’’ said Br’er.
“Uh, yeah, you can say that. Who are those roses for?’’ Smartguy asked.
“There for a beautiful jill name Juarez. When she sees these roses I brought, she’ll probably thank me, in a very seductive way I hope.’’ said Br’er.
After what he said Smartguy became red in jealousy. But then he shook his head to snap out of it.
“Get them upstairs to the second room to the right.’’ said Br’er.
Smartguy nodded and headed upstairs. When he made it to the room, he found Juarez. Juarez smiled widely and hugged him.
“Miss me?’’ Smartguy asked.
“Yes, of course I do.” said Juarez.
Smartguy remembered something and looked at Juarez.
“Uh, Juarez, Where’s Kenny?’’ Smartguy asked.
“He’s with Vanessa.’’ said Juarez.
‘’Oh, WHAT?!?!’’ Smartguy asked.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Oct 4, 2009 12:45:06 GMT -5
Ditto on what Spikey said.
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Post by Fisi on Oct 4, 2009 19:24:15 GMT -5
Thanx guy's. ^_^.
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