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Post by Fisi on Sept 24, 2009 14:50:01 GMT -5
Thanx.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 24, 2009 16:10:18 GMT -5
Br'er sure seems to take an interest to Jaurez.... Yes, and if he tries to take his interest to the next level; i'm sure she'll fight back as the tough weasel she is. Good chap. XD I'm with ya on that, Spikey. |
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Post by Fisi on Sept 24, 2009 16:11:49 GMT -5
Chapter:14
When morning arrived Vanessa and Maria who now works for Brer woke up.They both had to share the same room and bed for whatever the reason was.Vanessa who woke up first stretched her arms then rubbed her eye.
"Man I am soo tired I mean what do they put in these sheets?,"Vanessa asked.
Maria woke up at the sound of Vanessa's complaint and rubbed her eye aswell.
"I don't know but we gotta wake up so we can get started,"said Maria then got off of bed.
Vanessa nodded and went out of bed aswell.They both changed into their clothing.As soon as they were done Vanessa check her pockets.
"What are you looking for?,"Maria asked.
"Im looking for my gameboy,"she said then checked under the bed.
"Why?,"she asked.
"Cause...I wanna,"she said.
After searching Vanessa quickly looked down and sighed.She opened the room door.
"Where are you going?,"Maria asked.
"To go see if they have any chili in the chiefs kitchen,"said Vanessa.
"But Vanessa they don't have chili,"she said.
Vanessa stopped and turned to look at her.
"Maria there is no such thing as not having chili,"she said.
"Ok,"Maria said.
Vanessa left before she said Hmph.Maria sit on the bed and put her two hands under her chin.
"5,4,3,2,1,"she said while looking at the clock.
"NOO CHILI?!,"Vanessa yelled from the chief's kitchen.
"Told you soo,"Maria said under her breath.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 24, 2009 16:25:35 GMT -5
*gasps* Run, Vanessa, run!
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Post by Fisi on Sept 24, 2009 17:17:59 GMT -5
XD she'll do more thane that Lynx.Trust me. 0_0.
Vanessa:WHAT?!.
Me:Nothing.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 25, 2009 15:35:08 GMT -5
Chapter:15
Vanessa ran upstairs and immediatly opened the door wide.As soon as she saw Maria,she ran towards her and shook her like a ragdoll.
"HOW DID YOU KNOW?!" Vanessa asked.
"Um..I guessed." said Maria.
Vanessa's eyes widen and began to scream.Shelbi, who heard Vanessa's screaming, came to their room.
"What happened?" Shelbi asked.
Vanessa stopped and both twins stared at Shelbi.
"There's no chili." said Maria.
Shelbi nodded and left.Meanwhile, Jaurez was sleeping.She felt someone shaking her.Jaurez woke up and gasped.Then she turned her head.To her suprise it was a fat toon weasel who had dark fur, chestnut hair, green eyes, red muzzle, and wearing a maids outfit.
"Finally,I thought you would never wake up, girl." she said.
Jaurez eyes widen realizing who that voice was own by.
"Latoyah?" Jaurez asked.
"Yeah, it's me, girl." Latoyah said.
They both began hugging eachother.Jaurez soon stopped and looked at Latoyah.
"Where were you?" Jaurez asked.
"Br'er asked me if I can work here and I told him I didn't have a home.So......yeah." Latoyah said.
"But you kept saying how you love living at that hotel and didn't I saw you walked in?" Jaurez asked.
"That was to make it look like I did.And to tell you the truth....I have no home."Latoyah said then, she turned, and looked down.
Jaurez stood up and put her hand on her back.
"Its ok I understand." Jaurez said.
Latoyah smiled then sighed and passed Jaurez a square shaped box.
"Here you better put this on."Latoyah said.
"Whats this?" Jaurez asked.
"Your maid outfit." Latoyah said before leaving the room.
Jaurez opened the box and looked at the maids outfit.The skirt was a little too small, there were no sleeves, and there were some tights.Jaurez then saw a note.She grabbed it and looked at it that says."From:Br'er.Jaurez put down the note and groaned.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 25, 2009 16:12:27 GMT -5
Good.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 25, 2009 19:19:13 GMT -5
Lynx: Thanx ;D.
Spikey: Dont worry Spikey they will but not now cause they just started.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 26, 2009 9:00:30 GMT -5
Chapter:16
Jaurez began changing into her maids outfit. Once she put it on, she looked at the mirror.
"I look like a hussy." said Jaurez.
"You look great." said Br'er leaning on the door frame.
"Oh, Br'er, I didn't see you. How long have you been there?" Jaurez asked.
"Not that long, I just got here." Br'er said before he came walking towards her.
Br'er puts his finger under her chin.
"But I got to say, you look great, doll." said Br'er.
Jaurez flinched a little and gave Br'er a frown. She removed his finger.
"Please, don't call me that." said Jaurez.
"Why not?" Br'er asked.
"Cause you can call me chick, darling, or whatever but no one calls me doll." said Jaurez.
"Alright if thats how you feel....Oh I forgot to asked,can you go to the laundry room and help Latoyah out with the laundry?" Br'er asked.
Jaurez nodded.
"Follow me, I'll show you where it is." said Br'er.
Jaurez followed Br'er to the laundry room. Meanwhile, Killer and Chiboa are sitting on the front porch of Br'er's mansion.
"Man I don't know why but I'm sure in the mood for some digging up bones, chasing cats or tiny animals, and barking don't you?" Killer asked.
Chiboa cocked her head to the side and had a questioning upon her face.
"Whats the matter, don't you talk?" Killer asked.
"Yeah I do, it's just that, I don't do those kind of things." said Chiboa who appeared to have a Scottish accent.
"Huh?" Killer asked.
"Im an obiedient dog I don't do that, I never will, plus I have to do every command my owner says." said Chiboa.
"Well now you don't since you owner is dead." Killer said before he scratched his ear.
"Yeah but still I have to follow every command." said Chiboa.
A Rottweiler came and began to growl.
"WILL YOU TWO STOP BEING LIKE LOVE BIRDS AND START BEING GUARD DOGS!!" the Rottweiler yelled.
"HEY, I DONT LIKE HIM!!" Chiboa yelled.
"Yeah dude, I mean she bit my tail for crying out loud." said Killer.
"I DONT CARE IF YOU TWO ARE FRIENDS OR EVEN RELATED JUST GET BACK TO WORK!!" the Rottweiler said before he left.
Killer rolled his eyes and lied down. Chiboa didn't know what to do except to sit down and just do nothing.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 26, 2009 13:05:59 GMT -5
Very good. ^^
You're getting better each chapter. I've noticed you start using commas and that's a great start. ^^
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Post by Fisi on Sept 26, 2009 13:15:16 GMT -5
Thanx. ;D.
I'm a fast learner in my school.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 26, 2009 20:31:19 GMT -5
Aaaaawww you guy's are making me blush. *blushes*.
Lynx helped me on the commas and some other stuff.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 27, 2009 11:51:35 GMT -5
Chapter:17
Killer began walking in circles before he sighed. Chiboa cocked her head to the side and looked at him.
"What are you doing?" Chiboa asked.
"Trying to think." said Killer.
"Thats how you think?" Chiboa asked.
"Well, thats how Shenzi does it." Killer said before he stopped.
He came down and walked to a near by bush. He sniffed it at first, then he lift his leg up. Chiboa's eyes widen.
"Eew, thats disgusting." Chiboa said before looking away.
"Its how I mark to where I've been." said Killer.
"Thats sick." said Chiboa.
Killer rolled his eyes and began to walk in circles again. Meanwhile, Vanessa who was already at the green house was sitting on a bucket and watched as Shelbi and Maria are done bringing all the flowers to the table.
"Whew, that was the last one." said Shelbi.
"Vanessa, turn on the hose." said Maria.
"Ok." Vanessa said before she shrugged.
Vanessa walked to where the hose was.
"WAIT VANESSA!!" Maria yelled.
But it was too late, Vanessa turned on the hose and water was spraying everywhere. Vanessa tried to pull the hose down, but it was too strong.
"A LITTLE HELP!!" Vanessa yelled.
Shelbi and Maria ran to Vanessa and they tried pulling it down. The hose was out of water and it came down. They all stared at how wet it looks.
"Um, do you think Br'er will notice?" Shelbi asked.
"Um......no." Maria said then looked at Shelbi.
"I'll tell you guy's one thing, we are soo in trouble." said Vanessa.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 27, 2009 16:12:03 GMT -5
Uh-oh......
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Post by Fisi on Sept 27, 2009 19:20:25 GMT -5
Thanx.
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