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Post by Fisi on Sept 21, 2009 6:56:21 GMT -5
Chapter:7
The door opened showing a lady with a white dress and pink bow to go with while her hair was black and her eye's are green.
"HEAVEN!!,"Maria and Vanessa said it at the sametime.
"Its good to see my two lovely nieces again,"said Heaven.
Heaven gave them both a big hug.Then she looked at Red who looked like he've been knocked out.
"Um is he ok?,"Heaven asked.
They both looked at eachother then Red then Heaven.
"Nope,"they both said.
"Ok not going to bother asking,"Heaven said.
Heaven checked her purse to see if she has something for them.
"Do you know what your surprise is?,"Heaven asked.
"We know what it is can we ask you one thing first?,"Vanessa asked.
"Sure,"said Heaven.
"Can we use the house to have a huuuuugggeee party,"said Vanessa.
"VANESSSA!,"Maria whispered.
"Not at all,"said Heaven.
Vanessa then turned to Smartguy,Wheezy,and Jaurez who was holding Kenny.
"And thats why she's our favorite aunt,"said Vanessa.
Heaven then picked Red up on her back.
"Well I better go now with Red bye,"said Heaven.
"Bye,"They both said.
When they left Vanessa and Maria sat on the couch talking about their plans.
"Ok so you take care of the invites and I'll take care of the decoration and the DJ,"said Vanessa.
"Where can you find a DJ?,"Maria asked.
"Dont worry I got that all worked out,"said Vanessa.
Maria shrugged.Maria and Vanessa left the house and went straight back to theirs.As soon as they left Jaurez and Smartguy were sitting at the couch.
"*sigh*Maria and Vanessa you'll learn to love them,"said Jaurez.
"I liked Maria better then Vanessa at least she knows when not to get into trouble,"said Smartguy.
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At Heavens house Heaven and Red left Vanessa and Maria to the house.When Maria came in she saw what her twin sister did.
"Whoah Vanessa what did you,"Maria began.
"You like it my favorite is the snack table look a chili foutain,"said Vanessa.
The house was decorated with balloons,the DJ place,and the snack table.Everything looked awsome to Maria.
"Um don't you think Dad will be mad if he sees how much this all cost?,"Maria asked.
Vanessa shrugged not caring what he would think.
"Oh and plus our DJ is here,"said Vanessa.
She showed Maria an anthro turtle with a red head ban on his forhead.
"Meet Daddy Tee Yankee,"said Vanessa.
"Um a turtle?,"Maria said.
"I saw him rapping and he was perfect,"said Vanessa.
"Ok just going to hope that he party is gonna turn ok,"said Maria.
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Post by Cobrawolf on Sept 21, 2009 12:22:21 GMT -5
Nice Fic  |
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Post by Fisi on Sept 21, 2009 12:49:58 GMT -5
Thanx. ;D.
The rabbit suit guy that was Red it was a good idea from Spikey.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 21, 2009 13:28:33 GMT -5
Chapter:8
Maria headed upstairs to explore the house.She saw pictures of Heaven and Red at the carnival with Red that looks like he kept falling off from a motorcycle.She headed to the basement and she saw was full of boxes that looks like it was never opened. At the sametime Vanessa was sitting on the couch.She heard a loud growl.She turned and saw a small toon non-anthro dog with black ears and looks like a husky.Her collar had spikes which probably mean she was trouble. Vanessa eye's widen and screamed.Making Maria jumped she ran downstairs to see what had happened.When she came down all she saw was a husky pup licking Vanessa's face.
"Thats why you yelled?,"Maria asked.
"Cool this husky must have been Heavens new pet,"said Vanessa.
The husky pup came to Maria and put her paw out as she wanted a shake.
"And she must have been obedience,"said Maria.
Maria checked the dog tag.It has said Name:"Chiboa".
"Sweet the dog name is Chiboa,"Maria said.
"I bet whenever Red is all alone drunk in the house Chiboa comes and have to calm him down with her licks,"said Vanessa.
Night time had arrive and the house party began.Who was there at the party was Roger,Jessica,Baby Herman,Benny,Vidia,Shelbi,Shenzi,Banzai,Ed,and some more invited guest.The Toon Patrol arrived at the house.
"Here we are,"said Jaurez.
"Man they made the place like it was an exclusive house party,"said Smartguy.
They arrived the door and then Bongo was there .
"Who are you?,"Bongo asked.
"They hired this guy as a body guard?,"Smartguy asked.
"Well we're the Toon Patrolers surely our name is in that list,"said Jaurez.
Bongo checked the list.He saw their names in the list.He opened the door letting them inside.When they got inside all the lights were glowing into colors.Everyone was dancing and everyone was at the snack table with the chili foutain.
"I bet the chili foutain idea was from Vanessa,"said Wheezy.
Psycho giggles at what Wheezy had said.
"Duh wow what a party,"said Stupid.
"The DJ isn't bad too,"said Greasy.
Daddy Tee Yankee:Ella le gusta la Gasolina (Dama mas gasolina)Le encunta la gasolina(Dama mas gasolina.
The song was over and Foghorn Leghorn was up on stage.
"And that I say I say was Daddy Tee Yankee,"said Foghorn.
Everyone applauded to the turtle.
"Now it's time for the Cha Cha slide,"said Foghorn.
Everyone cheered everyone was at the dance floor doing the Cha Cha slide.Maria and Vanessa was leading the dance.
Maria and Vanessa:To the right now to the left take it back now yal one hop this time right foot two stomps left foot two stomps cha cha now yal.
Wheezy was lying on the wall smoking watching them dancing to the "Cha Cha Slide".When Wheezy turned his head his eye's widen when he saw Vidia.
"Hey mate miss me?,"Vidia asked.
Wheezy cheeks was red as he was blushing.Vidia came near him getting closer to him looking at his blue eye's. Vidia holds Wheezy hands and they both headed to the closet.After when the song was done Shelbi was there with Maria and Vanessa.
"This party is the awsome,"said Shelbi.
"You said it,"said Maria.
"Yup,"said Vanessa.
Then Vanessa drank Moutain Dew.Maria came to Shenzi,Banzai,and Ed and they were talking about how she missed the hyenas and how the party was. Clyde and Bonnie was there popping the balloons with the needle.
"Man this day is the greatest,"said Vanessa.
Chiboa who was chewing on a bone stopped chewing and began dancing on her four legs moving her head side to side.
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Post by silverblaze on Sept 21, 2009 16:39:36 GMT -5
AWWWW! Chiboa is just soooo cute!!!!!! >_<
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Post by Fisi on Sept 21, 2009 20:29:16 GMT -5
Thanx. Chiboa is the husky on the pic of my profile.
Chapter:9
Morning arrived and Vanessa and Maria woke up but this time in Heavens/Red's bed.
"That was a sweet party we just did,"said Vanessa.
"Tell me about it,"said Maria.
Shelbi came upstairs and saw them waking up.
"Finally I thought you two would never wake up,"said Shelbi.
"Well we are now but why are you here?,"Vanessa asked.
"I got permission from my parents to visit you two,"said Shelbi.
Downstairs they heard barking when they got out of bed and ran downstairs they saw Killer once again barking at Tails.
"I came here and this is what you do now,"said Tails.
"Hey not my fault your a cat,"said Killer.
Chiboa bit Killer's tail making him yelp.Killer glared at Chiboa and she walked away.Maria,Vanessa,and Shelbi who were watching giggled at what they saw. Maria stopped and turned to Shelbi.
"Hey Shelbi did Heaven and Red came back?,"Maria asked.
Shelbi put her head down not answering her question.Making them both worry they looked at her nervous.
"They did came back didn't they?,"Vanessa asked.
"Red did but Heaven,"Shelbi saidalmost finishing her sentence but she put her head down again.
Maria and Vanessa understood what Shelbi meant.
They all rushed back to their homes and saw their parents there with Red.
"Dad,Mom is what Shelbi saying is true?,"Maria asked.
Dolores and Eddie nodded their heads.Red rubbed his back neck and looked at them.
"What happened was there was something at the alley and it was chasing Heaven and when Heaven pushed me to go faster I ran like a turkey running for Thanksgivving then when I look back she was gone,"said Red.
Maria and Vanessa put their heads down.Vanessa was crying but her golden hat wasn't showing while Maria was crying while Shelbi hugged her trying to calm her down.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 22, 2009 15:28:33 GMT -5
Chapter:10
After when the Toon Patrol heard about what had happened they were a little upset.
"It's sad what had happened to Heaven,"said Jaurez.
"Should we go to the funeral?,"Smartguy asked.
"All of us are going,"said Jaurez.
"But what about Kenny?,"Stupid asked.
Jaurez put her head up high looking like she is looking at the cieling.Jaurez sighed.
"Kenny is too young to know about this kind of stuff for this Kenny is going to be left in the house with Winnie,"said Jaurez.
They all nodded their heads.As they went to the funeral they were all sitting down at the chair listening to the priest.
"In Gods name we pray may she rest in peace,"said the priest.
Everyone who supported Maria and Vanessa for their lost of their aunt was there.Shenzi,Banzai,Ed,Techna,and Killer were sitting in the ground next to Maria at her left side while Shelbi was next to Maria in her right side.Jaurez was next to Vanessa.
"Has anyone want to say something to Heaven?,"the priest asked.
"I like to say something,"said a guy.
His hair was long black and his face appeared to be Asian.He had a brown suit with a red tie and black shoes.He came to the priest and he turned to face the audience.
"This sad time reminds me of the story "A man and two hungry Tigers,"said the Asian guy.
Everyone looked at eachother then back at the guy.
"When the man was walking he saw two hungry tigers so he ran and the tigers were chasing him when he ran to a dead end the tigers were there but then he saw something on his right, it was a strawberry so he eat it and do you know what happened?,"the Asian guy asked.
Everyone leaned forward to listen.
"It was the most delicious strawberry ever,"the guy said then he went back to his seat.
"Is that supposed to be a joke or something?,"Shelbi asked.
Maria shrugged.
"Does anyone know who that guy is?,"Vanessa asked.
After the funeral was done Maria and Vanessa were left in the house with Jaurez and the toon patrol and The hyenas with and Shelbi.The door opened and it showed a blue weasel with a very thick mustache.He wore some sort of cowboy suit.
"How yal doing today?,"the weasel asked.
"Brer?,"Smartguy asked.
"Yup the one and only,"said Brer.
"But what are you doing here?,"Jaurez asked.
"I came here cause I heard that Heaven was long gone and sense nobody could find her she is now dead and she is a friend of mines,"said Brer.
Everyone stared at Brer for a sec.
"And sense she was dead her lawyer told me that the land in Africa called the Serengeti is mines now,"said Brer.
At the sound of that the hyenas and Maria frowned.
"WHAT WHY?,"Maria asked.
"Because let's say me and her were close friends and she wanted to pass the part of the land to me,"said Brer.
At what he said made the hyenas,Tails,Techna,Killer,and Chiboa growl.
"But I do have a preposition for ya,"said Brer.
Everyone started to lean forward and listened.
"I do need some new servants back at my mansion if I get to hire the ones I choose then the I promise you Maria every animal in the Serengeti is safe BUT if you guy's refuse let's say you'll regret it,"said Brer.
Everyone became worried.No one wanted to get hurt by Brer or anyone he hired to kill them.
"You know what you can forget it,"said Maria.
"Then I guess tommorow won't be yal lucky day,"said Brer.
Brer opened the door and left leaving everyone in the house nervous.
"Are you really sure?,"Smartguy asked.
"*nodded*That guy got some nerve,He choosing one of us to be his new servants,"said Maria.
"It probably isn't that bad I mean if he chooses Vanessa maybe she might learn about a thing or two about responsibility,"said Eddie.
Vanessa and Maria stared at their Dad with their serious face.
"Your right that would had never happened,"said Eddie.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 22, 2009 16:06:46 GMT -5
Dont worry Spikey it will just not now cause this part is the drastic part.
But Heavens death will reveal why.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 22, 2009 16:37:36 GMT -5
Sad Heaven died...
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Post by Fisi on Sept 22, 2009 17:50:28 GMT -5
Chapter:11
The Toon Patrol didn't know what to do.Brer is the most powerful weasel in L.A and he will do whatever it takes to get what he wants.When they came back home Bonnie and Clyde were there.
"What are you two doing here and where's Winnie?,"Jaurez asked.
"Mommy is died we saw her body at the basement and we just stared at all of that blood,"said Bonnie.
Jaurez didn't like this at all but she thought for a moment."Could this possibly be Brer's workers doing this?,"Jaurez thought.Jaurez sigh and turned to Greasy.
"Well Greasy since there mother is dead you have to take care of them,"said Jaurez.
"WHAT?!,"Greasy said.
"Greasy for once in your life can you think about them instead of you,"said Jaurez.
Greasy turned his head to Clyde and Bonnie.As he saw them with their tears coming out he sigh then groan.
"Ok fine,"said Greasy.
"We better take a good night sleep but first where's the dead body?,"Smartguy asked.
"We don't know when we open the door again when we opened one eye she was gone,"said Clyde.
Smartguy nodded.Clyde and Bonnie were going to sleep in the room of Stupids.While everyone fell asleep.Vidia who came to visit aswell slept with Wheezy.
Midnight came and at the Valiant house Maria who just woke up saw Shelbi and Vanessa there.
"MARIA FINALLY YOU WOKE UP WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF HERE NOW!!,"said Shelbi.
Maria looked around her room and saw some fire coming.Maria grabbed all the stuff she needed including the SnowGlobe her aunt gave her.Maria and the rest ran downstairs.Shelbi and Vanessa came out.Eddie came to Vanessa.
"Where's your sister?,"Eddie asked.
"She's right,"Vanessa began but was shocked when Maria wasn't there.
"AH MAN!!,"said Vanessa.
Meanwhile Maria was there at the fire trapped.Maria kept coughing could not take the smoke of the fire.Shenzi,Banzai,and Ed came and helped Maria out of the fire. Once they were out Maria came to Dolores and Vanessa and Shelbi came.
"Where were you we thought you followed?,"Vanessa asked.
"I was trapped,"said Maria.
"Well at least your ok,"said Shelbi.
As they turned they saw the Valiant house still on fire.Maria stared at the house and put her head down.The house that they once live burned down.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 22, 2009 19:29:53 GMT -5
Intense. 0.0
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Post by Fisi on Sept 23, 2009 10:29:27 GMT -5
Chapter:12
Morning arrived and since the Valiant's had their house burned down they had to live with Red in Heavens apartment.Brer arrived and had a smirk across his face.
"Poor Valiants really it's really ashame,"said Brer.
"Ok fine you know what you win Brer,"said Eddie.
"Yeah Yippee for you,"said Vanessa.
"Thats great but first since the people I choose are gonna be my servants or whatever they have to live with me,"said Brer.
"Fine as long as you treat them kindly,"said Dolores.
"Ver well then,Maria,Vanessa,and Shelbi will work in the garden,after seeing Chiboa and Killer I want them to be my guard dogs and Jaurez can be my offical maid,"said Brer.
"WHAT BUT JAUREZ HAS ALREADY HAVE A JOB YOU JERK!!,"said Vanessa.
"Yeah and besides Chiboa and Killer are only pups,"said Maria.
"Vanessa it's my decision and Maria don't worry thats already taken care of,"said Brer.
Everyone looked at Brer with hateness in their eye's.
"Well I better go and Vanessa tell Jaurez the news,"said Brer.
Then he left.There were silence in the air.
"I MISS BOY MEETS WORLD LAST NIGHT FOR THIS!!,"said Red.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 23, 2009 16:07:29 GMT -5
Shame on Br'er, makin' pups and teenagers work.
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Post by Fisi on Sept 23, 2009 16:40:17 GMT -5
Chapter:13
At the headquarters Jaurez recieved a call from the house phone.
" Toon Patrol headquarters this is Jaurez speaking,"said Jaurez.
"Hey Jaurez,um can I tell you something and I didn't get in trouble this time,"said Vanessa.
"Ok but you always get into trouble,"said Jaurez.
"Well yesterday our house was burned down God knows who did it and we have to live with Red in Heaven's apartment,"said Vanessa.
"Thats terrible,"said Jaurez.
"Yeah Brer came and to make it worse Me ,Maria,and Shelbi have to work for this guy as a gardener and really this guy does not know about me and flowers also he chose you to work as his "Personal" maid,"said Vanessa.
"WHAT WHY?,"Jaurez asked.
"He didn't say I told him that you work as a secretary but he says it's my decision blah blah blah,"said Vanessa.
Jaurez frowned but after a few talks and goodbyes she hung up the phone.Smartguy arrived and saw Jaurez unhappy.
"What is it?,"Smartguy asked.
After a few explanations Smartguy had to let Jaurez work for that guy for everyone sakes.He didn't know who's gonna babysits him since Maria and Vanessa are his babysitters.
Morning arrived and Maria,Vanessa,and Shelbi packed their things and said their goodbyes while Killer and Chiboa said their goodbyes.After that they went on the bus and headed to the masion of Brer's.As soon as they arrived Brer was there with his smirk.
"How lovely my workers are here,"said Brer.
Everyone widen there eye's and was about to say something but decided to keep there mouths shut.
"My servants are gonna show you your rooms and stations to work ,"said Brer.
They followed the servants.Jaurez was about to leave until Brer stopes her by putting his hand in her shoulder.
"Except for you Jaurez I'll be showing you around the mansion so you won't forget where I am,"said Brer.
Jaurez followed Brer inside the mansion.Every roomthat she followed him to made Jaurez bored about him buying all of these stuff.After when he stops infront of a room he turned to Jaurez.
"So any questions,"Brer asked.
"No,"said Jaurez.
"Good,"said Brer.
Be then opened the door and it was a room with a bed and all stuff that is usual.
"This is your room Jaurez ,my room is next to yours so to make it easier,"said Brer.
Brer then left and went somewhere and as for Jaurez she was speechless she doesn't know why but she got a strange feeling about Brer that she didn't like.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Sept 23, 2009 19:51:56 GMT -5
Br'er sure seems to take an interest to Jaurez....
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