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Post by Fisi on Aug 12, 2009 14:38:51 GMT -5
Hey ITS FREEDDS.XD just kidding I like to watch Fred alot so that gave me an idea.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 12, 2009 15:46:07 GMT -5
Yup I am but I am not going to tell you it's a secret shhh.
But I'll tell you this I am putting my evil OC character in this fic .
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Post by Fisi on Aug 12, 2009 17:00:44 GMT -5
Chapter:6
They heard laughing again which Chip snapped.
"Didnt I tell you guys to stop laughing,"Chip said.
"That wasn't us,"Clyde said.
"He he you can't catch me,"Joker said as their guess.
"He can talk who knew,"Dale asked.
"Not me,"Vanessa said.
They chased the Joker once he was shown.
"Get him,"Maria yelled.
They chased him towards the light which led them first to the eifel tower,then the park,then some can can place which Greasy enjoyed,and now led them to the airport.The Joker got on the plane.
"So long Suckers Ha Ha Ha,"Joker said when the plane flew.
"Ah man he got away,"Vanessa said.
"Not for long me and Dale figured out what was his next trip and it's Tokyo,"Chip said.
"Ok thats great but where is our Jet,"Jaurez asked.
"Oh no,"Wheezy whined so did the others.
"Uh your not flying on a Jet this time,"Chip said.
"Then where?,"Smartguy said.
"At a plane but not a regular one,"Dale said.
"Wait hold on it's said we travel by Jet,"Smartguy said.
"Uh you might wanna unfold that,"Dale said unfolding the sentence.
What it not only said you travel by Jet,plane,and boat.
"Wait to go Smartguy,"Vanessa said.
Smartguy growled then the plane came.It was a old guy wearing a pilot suit.
"C'mon if you wanna go to Tokyo,"the guy said.
"Seeya So long,"they both said.
They head towards the airplane which wasn't nice looking like others but at least it wasn't fast like the Jet.They flew off as the chipmunks wave good bye.
"Next stop TOKYO!!,"the pilot said heading to another country.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 12, 2009 17:27:37 GMT -5
No it's just an ugly Jack in the box thats used to be more until Maria and Vanessa destroy all of them but then Im guessing that this Joker escaped.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 12, 2009 18:12:54 GMT -5
Chapter:7 After when they left Paris they were in an airplane but it was filled with boxes and unwanted newspaper.
"Duh where's the batheroom,"Stupid asked.
The pilot came and put the blue bucket which was dirty and handed it to Stupid which he made a disgust face.
"There you go,"said the pilot.
"You expect us to go in that bucket,"said Vanessa.
"Oh no,"said the pilot.
Then he brung a pink bucket and then put it down.
"That will do it,"said the pilot.
"If you don't mind me asking who's flying this thing?,"Smartguy asked while hugging Jaurez.
"Dont worry this plane I made to control by itself,"the pilot said.
Then all of a sudden he brung the air jumping bags to them.Then he opened the plane door.
"Ok if you look to your right you will see that Tokyo is this way so put on your goggles and when you are about to land pull out this string it helps,"the pilot said.
"We are about to jump to Tokyo?,"Smartguy asked.
"Yes but as for that weasel with the huge stomach but grey fur she is going to land with this floating bag it may fall but it land safely for her,"the pilot explained.
Jaurez came with the pilot on the floating boat.
"Oh if I were you I better jump off the plane if I don't wanna get hit by a moutain,"he said then went down.
"MOUTAIN?!,"they said then looked at the moutain coming after them.
"Ok who is going first?,"Smartguy asked.
"Not me but I'll tell you one thing,"Vanessa said getting out her easy button.
"Oh give me that,"Maria said then threw it out her easy button.
"My easy button your coming with me,"Vanessa said grabbing her hand.
"Gladly,"Maria said.
Then they both jumped out.Psycho jumped out aswell.
"Caramba there nuts,"Greasy said.
"Ok boys in a count of three one,two,THREEEE,"Smartguy said parachuting.
So did the other Toon Patrol whats left was Clyde and Bonnie.
"You first,"Clyde said.
"Age before beauty,"Bonnie said.
"No game no pain,"he said.
"What pain?,"she asked but then got pushed by Clyde.
Clyde laugh but then Bonnie put his hand on his throat and they both went down.
Everybody was down and safe nobody got hurt.
"Hey wait a minute where's the girls?,"Smartguy asked.
But then Maria landed safely but Vanessa landed but kicked Stupid on the head and rolled over and Stupids head landed on the easy button.
"Oh I'm so sorry Stupid Hey my easy button,"Vanessa said getting off of Stupid then picked up her lucky easy button.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 12, 2009 19:57:20 GMT -5
Chapter:8 It was afternoon and the Toon Patrol and the others were on the streets of Tokyo.
"Boy this Tokyo is kinda big,"said Stupid looking up at the biggest towers.
"Oh how about we take a break,"Vanessa said.
Everyone looked at her in a weird way.
"What I wanna shop in Tokyo now that I got allowances,"Vanessa said showing her money.
"Which you owe me twenty bucks,"Maria said.
"Alright fine but go together I don't wanna lose you guys by that ugly looking Jack in the box,"said Smartguy.
The girls cheered and head off.
Smartguy then sigh and Jaurez came next to him then patted his back.
"Cant wait for you to handle teenage years,"she said.
"Uh Jaurez I've been thinking now since it's nine months you should probably say some kind of code for us to know about the baby coming,"Smartguy said.
"How about Ahh the baby coming,"Jaurez said.
"No to long how about a pinapples,"Smartguy saiid.
"Pinapple,"Jaurez said.
"Yeah cause there nice and sweet Smartguy said.
"Um I'll think about it,"Jaurez said.
Smartguy hit his head on a near by wall as he thought what he said was stupid.
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Post by cooper on Aug 12, 2009 20:13:45 GMT -5
..... the ending... from ice age.... But it worked with the chapter.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 12, 2009 21:22:57 GMT -5
Thanx.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 13, 2009 6:54:03 GMT -5
Chapter:9 They went to a hotel room to rest for awhile.Clyde and Bonnie turned on a Tokyo show.Which had a robot nothing else.
"Hey Bonnie isnt that one of those shows tha-,"Clyde began but then they saw the robot which made them roll over and saying strange words.
Smartguy and Jaurez came when thy saw the two kits rolling over and saying strange words.
"Whatcha watching?,"Smartguy asked then they both saw the robot which they roll over aswell.
"Will be right back until this commercial break,"said the tv.
"Whoah that was fun let's do it again,"said Bonnie who stopped.
They stopped doing that stuff when the commercial came.Greasy ,Wheezy,Psycho,and Stupid came back from the lobby.
"Well what they say?,"Smartguy asked.
"We don't know but Greasy liked the manager of the place,"Wheezy said.
"What I can't help it,"said Greasy.
Smartguy then rolled his eye's.Commercial was done and the robot was back.Now everyone was rolling over the place Saying strange thing.Maria and Vanessa came back.
"Hey guy's look what we Oh my gosh,"said Maria.
They were watching them rolling over the place.
"Remind me never to leave them,"said Vanessa who then pressed her easy button.
The show was over then everyone but in their cases they stopped.
"Uh what happened?,"said Smartguy.
"You guys were rolling over the place but look what we got,"said Vanessa showing them the things they brought.
"Cant wait to show them these,"said Vanessa.
"And you got all of that with your allowance money,"said Smartguy.
"Oh no I got them from your credit card Maria was the one who brought them,"said Vanessa.
Smartguy gasped and checked if she wasn't kidding.She wasn't.Vanessa gave back the credit card then Smartguy snatch it back.
"Yeah I sooooo can't wait for teenage years,"said Smartguy being sarcastic.
Jaurez giggled at his sarcasim which was funny.Then they saw the Jack in the box or as they call it Joker past the hallways then he stopped jumping and saw them.They saw the Joker.
"Get it,"said Vanessa.
The Joker ran for his life then they were running after it.
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Post by KrazyRandomness on Aug 13, 2009 12:12:11 GMT -5
Good so far. ^_^
Sorry I just replied. I was at a friend's house. -_-'
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Post by Fisi on Aug 13, 2009 12:21:30 GMT -5
Chapter:10 They followed the Joker out of the hotel but they checked out already.They chased him through the city and head off to where the Jokers taking them.
"Man this would be easier if would we brung our Dodge we us,"said Smartguy.
"Oh no I am not going through the damages in here,"said Jaurez.
The Joker led them to the carnival.Stupid was distracted by cotton candy and to make him snap out of it Wheezy slapped his head.
"Ow thanks,"said Stupid rubbing his head.
They chased the ugly Jack in the box into the strange house.The Toon Patrol and the others went inside.First they went to the mirrors,then the room was full of spots,then they head to lots of doors it was full of them but when everyone opened the singal door they sneaked up opened then a dino came and roared at them which they closed quickly.There was one more door left there hope was that the Joker was there but then thy opened it an they were right back outside.
"Oh no we're right back to where we're started,"said Psycho.
"Look there he goes and he is going straight out of the carnival and going to the airplane again,"said Vanessa.
"This ugly jack in the box always gets the best rides,"said Smartguy.
"So what are we gonna take this time?,"Jaurez asked.
"I guessing that boat,"Smartguy said pointing to the boat.
Everyone headed to the boat and went inside.Smartguywent where the captain was.
"Hello where would you like to go?,"said the captain.
"Just follow that airplane,"said Smartguy.
"Ok,"said the captain who then drived his boat.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 13, 2009 12:26:02 GMT -5
No prob Lynx.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 13, 2009 13:07:50 GMT -5
Chapter:11 The boat was heading towards the airplane whiched already landed so that means that it was time to get off.
"Hope you enjoy your stay in Austrailia,"said the captain.
"Wait we're in Austrailia?,"Smartguy asked.
"Yeah but don't worry we got someone to help you,"the captain said then turning his head.
There was a weasel coming down and it looked like she was a female.She was a caramel colored weasel with blonde hair but it was messy but luckily it was in a pony tail.She had azure eyes like Wheezy's.She wore a blue sleeves jacket with a white t shirt but a red tie and a blue zoot hat with red lines around it's hat.And to there guess she smokes cause of her cigarret pack.
"I want you to meet Cigarrene AKA Vidia,"said the captain.
"Hey there mates how you doing,"said Vidia in a Austrailian accent.
"Oh hello I'm Maria and this is, Smartguy,Jaurez,Vanessa,Clyde,Bonnie,Stupid,Greasy,Wheezy,and Psycho,"Maria said.
"Hey I know you your that Maria that helped my creator get out of those dreadful cheetahs,"said Vidia.
"Oh you mean Shelbi yeah I know her is she here?,"Maria asked.
"Yeah follow me,"said Vidia.
Vidia followed them to a near by house.It was beautiful cause there was a lake there and trees were beautiful as well.
"This is the place,"said Vidia opening the door.
Vidia opened the door but then smoked which Wheezy saw and was surprised that she smokes like him.
"What I like smoking smoking,"said Vidia.
Wheezy nodded but then Vidia came aside of him.
In the living room was Shelbi watching tv while eating chips.
"Hey Shelbi Maria's here and brung her friends,"said Vidia.
"Hey Maria long time no see how's it been?,"said Shelbi.
"Everythings ok so are the hyenas but Shelbi I never knew you had a creation like Vidia here,"said Maria.
"I didn't but then when my parents had to go somewhere and I was bored thats when I made her,"Shelbi said.
"You got chili,"said Vanessa.
"Yeah it's in the kitchen,"Shelbi said pointing the direction of the kitchen.
"Finally,"said Vanessa.
"Maria I didn't know you had a sister,"Shelbi said.
"Yeah a reeeaaal sister,"said Maria.
"I heard that,"said Vanessa with the bowl full of Chili and eating with her mouthfull while holding a spoon.
"Shelbi have you and Vidia seen a ugly Jack in the box?,"Maria asked.
"Well if you mention all that laughing and the shadow showing Jack in the box then yeah I think it went up,"said Shelbi.
"Thanks,"said Maria going upstairs.
Maria and the rest went up they checked the room but nothing.Stupid just realized something.
"Duh guys where is Wheezy and Vidia?,"Stupid asked.
Then he heard kissing noises in the closet and once he opened it he saw Wheezy making out with Vidia.
"What,"said Wheezy.
"Yeah excuse you,"said Vidia who then shut the door.
Stupid had a look on his face that he should never opened another closet full of kissing noises again.The rest of the gang saw that he was no where found but all that was left was the attic.They head up and saw old stuff.They searched everywhere but nowhere to be found but they heard that old pop goes the weasel thing.
"Ah c'mon give us a break,"said Psycho getting annoyed.
Then the head pop out and it was Joker with his head out making them scared.The Joker hoped downstairs Shelbi started screaming then grabbed a broom stick but it got away.They went to the hallways where Wheezy and Vidia was.
"Thank goodness your here where were you guys when we needed you?,"Maria asked.
"Uh we were busy looking for him in the closet,"Wheezy said.
"Duh but I saw you and Vidia ki-,"Stupid began but Wheezy put his hand on his mouth.
"We were looking for it nothing else,"Wheezy said.
They head downstairs where Shelbi and now Vanessa was.
"I saw it ,it left,"said Shelbi.
"Ok let's go,"said Smartguy.
"Bye Shelbi I'll visit you again ,"said Maria giving a hug to Shelbi.
"I'll see ya soon and tell the guys I said hi,"said Shelbi.
Maria nodded but then was pulled by Vanessa.The boat was still there which probably means there taking the boat again.Vidia gave a kissed Wheezy on the cheek before he left.They were inside the boat and Vanessa came to Wheezy.
"What was that about?,"Vanessa asked.
"Nothing what you got there?,"Wheezy asked.
Vanessa looked at what he was looking then back at him.
"Chili,"said Vanessa.
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Post by Fisi on Aug 13, 2009 13:10:08 GMT -5
Yeah imagined that did happened.XD
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Post by Fisi on Aug 13, 2009 13:29:50 GMT -5
Chapter:12 The boat was sending them to a city but was different.
"Ok welcome to Italy,"the captain said.
"Oh I always wanna go to Italy,"said Jaurez.
The boat stopped and they head off watching the boat leave made them worry either they are going next in a plane or that jet.Jaurez felt someone was pulling her shirt and it was Clyde and Bonnie looking up at her.
"Jaurez I'm tired,"said Bonnie.
The sun was coming down and they did had a free room at a hotel so that must have mean that it's time they got a break.The hotel wasn't that far and Smartguy rented to stay at one day just in case they left again.They had went to their hotel rooms and Jaurez and Maria set the two kits to bed.The rest were in bed except for Smartguy who was up.Smartguy woke Jaurez up.
"You wanna come with me and explore awhile,"he asked.
"(yawn) Sure,"she said then getting up.
Smartguy and Jaurez explored the Italy place.They had went to tower ones and pizza place cause they were both hungry.Then head off into those tiny boats.Jaurez was looking up at the stars.
"Its beautiful here,"Jaurez said.
"Thats not the only beautiful sight,"said Smartguy looking at Jaurez.
Jaurez giggled at that comment but then she looked at him.
"Smartguy this night I'm am going to remember this always you promise your going to remember this,"Jaurez said.
"I promised,"said Smartguy.
They both kissed and once the boat stopped they got off.They went back to the hotel room and finding the two kits still asleep as always.
"Look at that isn't that cute?,"Jaurez asked.
"Yeah for a bunch of pain in the but there pretty cute,"said Smartguy.
The two weasels were back sleeping.Smartguy hopes that the baby don't come when there still chasing it but he had nothing to worry about now cause her wife will say when the baby comes but Smartguy hopes that she will remember what to say.
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