my new comic

[Greasy]

Gurlthang: You rally have to eat something! I hope your brain is working better now.LOL
But I know this problem, I can´t remember faces and names aswell.
Fatal: I don´t know how it is in USA or where ever you live, but here in Germany a woman doesn´t like it, if you tough them without asking, or other macho behavior.
Here most women are looking for the sensible James Blunt type of a man, if you know what I mean.


However, here is the next bat last page of chapture one.
Page 11


Dexter and his friend reached the other side of the lake.

"When we´ve arrived your home?" Cecil asked.

"Come out and you´ll see." Dexter made his fur dry.

Cecil came out of the water and all he could say was a long deep: "Wooooww!"

"Cool, eh?" Dexter said.

"I have the best home in this whole territory!" He said proud.

"And the sounds of the water fall are helping to fall asleep." He showed Cecil the water fall, which was right next the cave.

"That´s great, I´m sooo tired!" Cecil groaned.
"Then let us go inside." Dexter said going ahead into the cave.

Cecil followed him into the dark.

Cecil layed him self near next to Dexter.
He doesn´t like that really: "Well, whe have to work on this, I think!"


End of chapture 1


I have the first 2 pages of chapture 2, but I have to color them, maybe I post them here tomorrow.

[Fatal hilarity]

Jul 5, 2009 7:02:52 GMT -5 Greasy said:

Fatal: I don´t know how it is in USA or where ever you live, but here in Germany a woman doesn´t like it, if you tough them without asking, or other macho behavior.
Here most women are looking for the sensible James Blunt type of a man, if you know what I mean.

Oh, American women prefer the sensitive type as well, but I do know that female cartoon fans 13-years-old or older tend to like just about any handsome male cartoon character. Greasy may be macho, but he's also the exotic, romantic type (sort of), which I know a lot of people like.
I'm not familiar with James Blunt...

[KrazyRandomness]

There are also women who like funny dudes. Me? I don't think I'll ever be lucky enough to have a date...let alone a BF...

Anyway, this was a good chapter and I love reading it.

[Greasy]

Fatal: Yeah, in this case you are right, i never saw this, but maybe cause I´m my self exotic here, and so the way he is is normal for me.
Lynx: I feel sorry for you. I had girlfriends, but there was only kissing, not more, so i know how you feel. I never saw you before, but I must say your charactor is very nice, and I´m happy that I can be your friend.
And thank you for finding my chapture good.

[KrazyRandomness]

Thank you, Greasy. That means a lot to me.

[Greasy]

I´m glad that you understood what I wanted to say.
Because I have said some similar to an other person here, and she thought I wanted to be her boyfriend now, haha.
I´m glad that I didn´t sound that way.

[Greasy]

Ok, I was very fast today and the new pages of chapture 2 are ready now.

-Note- The first 2 pages are a hunting scene and some of you, powderpuffbunny and maybe others have massive problems with death and so I worn you.
But I promised that I would never draw bloody scenes her, and I hang on what I said.

Hope you like it anyway.
In this 2 pages are no spoken words, cause they are emocional enough.

Chapture2
Page1

t was a sunny next day:



A white tail deer was running fast through the fields.

He hurried, cause something followed him very fast.

It was a dark grey furred animal, which was similar looking to a wolf, but he was hunting alone.

It was Dexter, a big strong wolverine, who decided to hunt this deer, cause Cecil his new best friend was hungry and fall on his nerves.


The dder tried to hang him off, running through fields, forests, jumping over trees....

But nothing worked. Dexter was very good at jumping, too.


After a while he ran beside the deer.
This was the perfect time to attak it.


This was page one.
A very dramatic scene for the first page.
What will happen next, will Dexter get the deer?

[KrazyRandomness]

Very detailed. I'm glad you put detail in everything. ;D

[Giggles]

WHOOOOO KILL THE DEER KILL THE DEER!!!! YUM!!! ;D

[Greasy]

Wow, I never thought you would like it so much!
Ok, here´s page 2 and for a while the last page, cause I have to draw the next pages at first.

Page2:



Dexter was right next to the deer now and he tried to jump.

He land on the deer´s back.


The deer got him self out of control and stumbled down.

He bit the dder into his neck, so he died.

Now when the deer was dead now, Dexter looked for enemies like wolves or bears, which could steal his food.

He went back to Cecil and his cave, taking the big deer with him.
Cecil was very happy now. They had food for a few days.


Ok, don´t know when the next pages are ready, so please be patient.

[KrazyRandomness]

....Yeah, I'm kinda shocked at Skully's reply too. I kill on rabbit on a game and she's like "NO!!!! DON'T BUNNY!!!", yet in a comic book she's like "KILLL THE DEER!!!!!!!"

....anyway....

I like it.

[jebikun]

It's like a cartoon show but with more wild life!
Great comic Greasy! You're really comfortable playing with the anatomy of the animals +_+

[Greasy]

Thank you!
I´m glad you like it so much.
The next pages are drawn, only have to get colored now, but this can take a few days.

Only thing I can say is, the farmer is coming and it´s going dramatically for the wolverines!

[Giggles]

whooo!!! he got the deer!!!!!! FOOD!!!!!!! and sunraye sometimes im an animal luver and other times im like EVIL!!!!! LOL

[Greasy]

Haha, well, I don´t see this as evil, cause if you don´t kill for fun, just for food, it´s ok.