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Post by Lugia on Aug 3, 2008 17:05:37 GMT -5
Watch your back, 'cause Cristy's back!!! ;D
Chapter 1
"Let's throw away the doll already!!" Flasher groaned. "But the fire's not finished burning her yet!" Stupid said. "Who cares!? The doll's creeping me out." Flasher replied. He can see the doll's head smiling at him. "Fine. I'll throw it away." Wheezy sighed. He filled a bucket with water and splashed it at the fire.
Wheezy grabbed the doll. He walked outside and dumped it in the trash can. "There!!" Wheezy said. He closed it. Then he walked back in.
Smartass sat down on the couch. "Finally some quiet time!!" he sighed. He turned the tv on. That night, Wheezy yelled, "Psycho, it's your turn to take out the trash!!!" "Okie Dokieeee!!!" Psycho laughed. He grabbed the trash bag and walked outside. When he saw the trash can, he noticed it was open. "Wheezy must've forgot to close the trash can when he threw the dolly away!!" he thought.
When Psycho threw the trash bag in the can, he closed it properly. Then he walked back in the house. "Hey, Wheezy!! You forgot to close the trash can when you threw that doll away!!" Psycho yelled. "Dont be stupid!! I closed it!!" Wheezy yelled angrily. "But it was opened when I got there!!" Psycho explained. "Must be some jerk using our trash can." Greasy said. "Probably." Psycho agreed.
To be continued..................
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Aug 3, 2008 17:54:15 GMT -5
dun duuuuuuuuuuuun........ she opened it and got out! omg!!!  |
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Post by Lugia on Aug 10, 2008 19:18:25 GMT -5
Finally, here's Chapter 2!!!!
Chapter 2
While the Toon Patrol were asleep, Flasher couldnt sleep. He is concerned about the doll. It was 1:00am. Flasher was still awake. Then, suddenly, Cristy jumped out and hanged on to Flasher's neck! "Whooa!!!" Flasher yelled in terror. Flasher ran down to the hallway. All the weasels were awake. When they saw Flasher with Cristy, they were surprised. "Impossible!!" Smartass gasped. "The haunted doll of doom has arrived!!" Psycho gasped too. "It's Cristy!" Stupid said. "She's back!!!" "Shut up and help me out!!" Flasher said. Cristy was choking him. "Stop it, Cristy!!" Stupid cried. Greasy grabbed a shotgun. "Take this!!!" he yelled. But he misses. "Whoa, watch the hat!!" Flasher said as he dodged the bullets.
"We need a powerful toon to help destroy this sissy thing!!" Slimy said. "But who!? Ho-Oh!?" Greasy said. "No,...Ho-Oh's not a toon! He's a Pokemon!!" Psycho replied. "But he's a fire type! He can use fire type moves to burn that doll once and for all!!" Smartass said. "Great idea, guys!!" Greasy agreed. "Uhhhh,...guys? You're for getting something!" Psycho said. "What!? Cant you see were in a conversation here!?" Smartass said. Psycho pointed out. All the weasels looked.
Flasher was already tied up. "I'm gonna get rid of you once and for all!!" Cristy hissed. "Help me!!" Flasher said in a muffled voice. Cristy carried Flasher outside. "Get her!!" Smartass commanded. Wheezy grabbed his favorite tommy gun. He shot out millions of bullets. They all shot Cristy's body, but not the heart! Wheezy growled angrily. "Great, thanks alot, Wheez!! You made the doll look even more ugly!!" Smartass said. He's right. All the bullets from Wheezy's tommy gun were inside Cristy's body and they left alot of bloody holes!! "Bloody GIR could be in there!!" Stupid giggled. "Shut up!!" Smartass smacked Stupid.
Cristy was about to make a run, until Slimy trapped Cristy in a box. "Let me go!!!!!" Cristy roared furiociously. "Man, she's worse than Chucky!!" Slimy thought. Smartass grabbed his car keys. He unlocked the car. "C'mon, boys!! We're going to Mt. Faraway!!" he hollered. "To see Ho-Oh?" Psycho guessed. "Yup." Smartass said.
All the weasels packed up. Smartass, Psycho, Stupid, and Wheezy were in the front. Flasher, Slimy, and Greasy were in the back. Slimy taped and stapled the box and taped it well so Cristy wont escape. "Dumb ugly doll!!" Greasy said. He kicked the box to the side.
Smartass started the car and drove. "So we're gonna go see Ho-Oh and ask if he can destroy Cristy?" Greasy said. "Yes." Smartass replied. It was a long road trip. They got out of Toontown and went into the human world.
"Let's see what's on the radio!" Smartass said. He pressed some buttons. "How 'bout 107.9!!" Greasy said. "Naah!!!" Smartass disagreed. "No, 96.3!!" Psycho said. "No!" Smartass said. "94.7!!" Wheezy said. "Okay!!" Smartass agreed. He tuned in. All the weasels were listening. "Beautiful Girls" by Sean Kingston was playing. "I sang this song to a gal before." Greasy said. "I won her heart, but a week later, she died in a plane crash." he sniffed. "Gosh, that's too bad." Psycho said.
To be continued!...............................
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Post by Lugia on Aug 10, 2008 19:21:40 GMT -5
For those of you who dont know Ho-Oh, he's the Pokemon in my trainer card!!  Here's a better image of him! I heard he was just like Dyna Blade!!(Dyna Blade is a friend and foe character who appeared in the Kirby show!!)  |
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Aug 13, 2008 21:08:30 GMT -5
ok.... it was odd how u added ho-oh in there.... but. i liked the chapter, kinda i guess. not to crazy bout it bcuz of pokemon being added, but oh well. looks like im the only one reading anyway.
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Aug 14, 2008 11:09:39 GMT -5
YAAAY LOTSA PSYCHO IN THIS!!!! KEEP IT UP!!!!
IT'S SCARING ME ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Lugia on Aug 16, 2008 15:38:56 GMT -5
Here's Chapter 2!!
P.S: OMG my signature's gone!!!!!!
Chapter 2
While the weasels were still traveling, Psycho was watching Flasher abusing Cristy's box. "Take that, you stupid doll!!" he yelled angrily. Then, Stupid saw the Toon Town Fun Carnival. "Ooo!!!" he said. "We're not going to the stupid carnival today! We're going to Mt. Faraway but we can go there another time!" Greasy said. Stupid sighed.
"Are we there yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet??" Wheezy asked. "I'm bored..." "Shut up!! Dont you know why Ho-Oh's place is called Mt. Faraway!?" Smartass yelled angrily. "I dont want to see this guy,..but it's the only way to get rid of the stupid doll!!!"
All the weasels grew silent. "You should've not talk to the boss like that!" Psycho whispered to Wheezy. "So what?" Wheezy said. Psycho suddenly realized that Cristy was breaking free. "Oh no!!!" Psycho gasped. He jumped and covered the box with his sleeves. "I'll get the tape!!" Greasy said. He taped the box. Then he puts the box inside another box. Slimy locked it up with a lock. "There!!" Greasy said. "There's no way that doll's gonna escape now!!"
A few hours later, the car was running out of gas. "Great!" Smartass growled. He slowly drove the car to the gas station. "I'll go feed my car some gas. You guys stay here!!" he said to the weasels. "No problem, boss!!" Stupid said.
When the car's back in shape, Smartass starts the engine and drove off. All the weasels can hear Cristy roaring angrily and banging the box. "Man, that stupid doll reminds me of the movie, Child's Play." Flasher said. "Yep." Psycho agreed.
Smartass suddenly noticed that they're getting close to Mt. Faraway. "Atlast!!" he sighed. Smartass parked the car near a tree and got out. "Okay, Stupid, since you're the biggest, carry the box with the dumb doll." "Okay, boss!!" Stupid said. He lifted the box. All the weasels got out. "Now remember, we need to be nice to this Ho-Oh or he'll get mad and burn us all. And we wont be able to get rid of the doll. Understood?" Smartass said to the weasels. They all nodded. "Good." Smartass said.
To be continued......
P.S.S.: For those of you who saw Child's Play, the newest movie, The Revenge of Chucky will come out this year!! So BEWARE!!!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Nov 30, 2008 14:40:35 GMT -5
HEY!! FINISH THIS!!!! I WANNA READ IT!!!!!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Nov 30, 2008 14:49:37 GMT -5
this story reminds me of the time my family went to this wierd restaurant. it was old and has TONS of antique stuff EVERYWHERE. there was this old tin bathtub on a shelf with a mannequin wearing a yellow rain hat (that looked more like a cowboy hat) sitting in it. he was REALLY creepy. his eyes seemed to follow you around the room. we were sitting there eating, but we were all so creeped-out that we all kept staring at it, like it was gonna get us. my mom said, "I can't get over that creepy guy. he's like the cowboy father of Chucky!" we were like, "What?!" so mom explained about Chucky, which made me start thinking scary thoughts (I'm pretty flighty - not easily scared but easily startled, ya know?) and getting SO nervous I was twitching (which made my sisters somewhat amused because Twitchy is a weasel in my Toon Patrol fanfic). then my sister's eyes got wide and she said, "I found something creepier. DON'T LOOK BEHIND YOU." of course, i HAD to look anyway. i turned REALLY slowly, really nervously. there, behind me on a shelf, was a REALLY old porcelain baby doll with the paint chipped and blackened. its eyes were blank. i was so nervous, i couldn't stop thinking about it. i was surrounded by killer dolls...  *fpshhhhhhh* fanfic idea...don't worry, Lugia, i won't plagarize you  |
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Nov 30, 2008 15:03:32 GMT -5
Yay!!!!!! Finally there... Oof. I just made a comic of my squad (plus Durza) after watching a terror movie.
Nice OC, Psychoangel51402!!!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Nov 30, 2008 15:14:07 GMT -5
er, what's OC?
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Post by Just Plain Rydell on Nov 30, 2008 15:26:34 GMT -5
L O L. Original character. She's beautiful!!! You're a really good artist!
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 1, 2008 1:09:15 GMT -5
Dizzy: *blushes* Really? You think I'm beautiful?
Wow, thank you! Have you seen my YouTube account?
(PS, I was pretty sure what OC meant, I just wanted to be sure so I didn't sound like an idiot ^_^)
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Post by psychoangel51402 on Dec 1, 2008 1:11:35 GMT -5
seriously, thank you SO much!
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Here's a better image of him! I heard he was just like Dyna Blade!!(Dyna Blade is a friend and foe character who appeared in the Kirby show!!)
