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Post by thekeygirl666 on Aug 8, 2011 9:48:05 GMT -5
Thank you! What do you think of Greasy;s history so far?
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Post by American Marten on Aug 8, 2011 10:37:46 GMT -5
I think it's pretty good as far as I know.
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 8, 2011 11:26:37 GMT -5
yeah, same thought here!!! DisneyPlease!
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Post by thekeygirl666 on Aug 8, 2011 13:57:06 GMT -5
Thank you, both of u. I am happy I have such awesome fans!
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 8, 2011 15:56:02 GMT -5
You're welcome!!! ^_^
DisneyPlease!
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Post by thekeygirl666 on Aug 9, 2011 5:34:39 GMT -5
Yeah, I just wanted to get this done. Thanks for reading and tell me how much you're giving me from 1 to 10, plz.
End
As I looked 'round fer a job, fer some reason, all da memories I'd trampled on rose ta da surface. I t'ought 'bout 'ow 'love', as ev'rybody called it, 'ad made me da way I was. Da more I t'ought 'bout it, da more I b'came convinced.
Vanessa's love fer Steven made 'er use me like a wrench. Marriage killed my mama, in a way. If she 'adn't gotten pregnant wit' Elenita, she'd still be alive. Mortimer's lust fer Elenita killed 'er. My love fer 'er made me kill Mortimer. Papacito's love fer me made me a runaway and 'im a paitent at a mental 'ospital (I'd found out t'anks ta a letter 'e'd managed ta smuggle in da mailbox). And da men dat visited my ladfriends used 'em 'n' tossed 'em 'side like broken lightbulbs. Love sucks. It kills. It destroys lives. It's kinda like cocaine, I guess; feels great at first, but ya paid fer it sooner 'r later.
Dat's when I made my decision: I'd neva' fall in love again. Sure, maybe I'd flirt an' 'ave a drink, but den, on dat day, I promised myself I'd neva' fall in love wit' somebody eva' again. No way was I gonna make my life worse.
Dat's why, when I joined da Toon Patrol wit' my ol' buddy David (now 'e called 'imself 'Smart Guy') an' t'ree otha' fellas, I was da only one afta' a coupla years ta not 'ave a woman. I coulda 'ad lovers by da dozen, but I knew love wasn't gonna come. Not ta me.
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Post by disneyplease on Aug 9, 2011 11:01:52 GMT -5
Wow very Nice Story KeyGirl!!! on a scale of 1 to 10, I think this story deserves a 10!!! DisneyPlease!
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Post by shabushabu9 on Sept 27, 2011 4:48:48 GMT -5
this story was really great, are there any other histories of the other weasels?
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Post by thekeygirl666 on Sept 29, 2011 5:43:53 GMT -5
Thank u what did u like? And yes, I also wrote something called 'Blue Past Prologue'.
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Post by shabushabu9 on Oct 5, 2011 0:05:44 GMT -5
i actually liked the whole story lol, you should write stories of the other weasels too =D
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