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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 11, 2008 19:18:35 GMT -5
kk!!!! im finally gonna start a fic im so excited!!!! pleaz go easy on me yall, kk???
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 11, 2008 19:41:01 GMT -5
ok, chapter 1!!!!
Wise Guy's POV
-"Ok Mom, I'm gonna miss the bus!!! stop takin' pictures!!!"
-"But sweetie, you look so cute in your High School uniform!!!"
-I didn't think so. Oh, hey. My name's Micheal. This is my first day of High School & my mom's going nuts! O, mothers.
- "Mom!!! The bus is waiting!!! Can I please leave before I miss the first day?"
- "Ok sweetie...."
- "Mom!! Stop calling me sweetie!!!!!!"
-"But...."
-"I gotta go, OK?"
-...."Ok, swee- I mean, Micheal."
-"Bye."I replied, finally glad to get out of there.
-Mrs. Smith watched her son board the bus." Why did he have to grow up?" she said to herself, tears blocking her vision.
-Man that was close. I walked down the isle, looking for an empty seat. I found one, across from this crazy looking toon weasel with spikey hair and swirling eyes.
-He looked at me like I was the one who was crazy and said in this high-pitched voice,"You know, you shouldn't be mean to your mom like that. You should feel lucky to have a mom. I don't have one." He kinda looked at the ground when he said that, but then he perked up and said,"Hey, you wanna be friends? My name's Charlie. What's yours?" He added a giggle. A really annoying, high-pitced giggle.
-" It's Micheal." I said, mesmarized by his eyes.
-I looked outside, and I saw the school.
-'Great.' I thought." I can finally get somewhat away from this guy.
-I got off the bus, & I looked up at the giant school.'Well, this is it, I said, looking up. I took a deep breath and pulled open the doors.
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 11, 2008 19:41:54 GMT -5
i no it was kinda short, but mey fingers are already startin 2 hurt ;D
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 11, 2008 19:59:50 GMT -5
koolio sis!!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 12, 2008 17:09:53 GMT -5
Good start Buddy ! Who's next? Me? Graesy.Please not with Joy XD
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 12, 2008 18:48:03 GMT -5
hehehe lol i wuz gonna do wheezy next....... & now i will
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 12, 2008 19:29:50 GMT -5
srry yall i have to start over so the next chappy will b up 2morrow my fic got deleted...... I-(
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Post by Sodapop on Feb 13, 2008 11:57:20 GMT -5
Ok, where is it? You said itll be up today.
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Post by lollipop101 on Feb 13, 2008 15:11:12 GMT -5
I am waiting 4 ur fanfic riss!! hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Usashi Koto Kito on Feb 13, 2008 16:40:24 GMT -5
Why did it get deleted! I was drooling for that part! X( It's not oyu and Biscuit I told you wrong it's Pic I found..The wrongness is so painful!!!!!!!
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 13, 2008 17:34:28 GMT -5
Ok, where is it? You said itll be up today. I SAID IT WILL B UP.... oh now
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 13, 2008 17:35:27 GMT -5
Why did it get deleted! I was drooling for that part! X( It's not oyu and Biscuit I told you wrong it's Pic I found..The wrongness is so painful!!!!!!! o god im mentally disturbed!!!!!!!
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 13, 2008 18:32:49 GMT -5
kk..... let me try again...... Chappy 2 Wheezy's POV Man I look sexy in this uniform!!! Well, the ladies are checkin' me out, so I would think so. But there's this one girl with long red hair and round bangs that won't stop following me around! I turn around to look at her and she bumps into me from walkin' so close. I turn around and scream,"What the hell are you tryin' to do?! RAPE ME?!!!!!? So she giggles. And says,"Oh! He talked to me...." I just stare at her. She blushes, but that quickly goes away when I say, "FREAK." ,and walk away. The bell rings just as I walk into homeroom. I sit down, lookin' around. Surprisingly, I see 5 other weasels. Unfortunately, the girl that was following me around was there. Another, probably tryin' to look real tough, was wearing a pink hat. He also had dark brown fur and a chain around his neck and on his pants. The one that freaked me out the most ,though, was the one sitting next to him smiling. He had bright, red, spiky hair and blue eyes. But when I looked closer, I saw that they were swirling behind the blue part!! They were red and yellow, red and yellow..... There was one more dude, a really dark furred, kinda tall weasel. He wore a green hat with his uniform, bowler shoes, and a locket around his neck. He had long, greasy lookin' hair. Most of the girls were drooling over him, I swear. Then the last one was the other female weasel. She had short hair, spiky and dyed pink at the ends. 'Cool hair', I thought looking at her. I jerked my head up, everyone was saying the Pledge! 'Oh jeez, perfect' I thought, jumping up. We finished, and then the teacher started calling roll. My name was first. "Jake Casey?", he said. "'Sup?" , I said casually. "Jackie Dewey?" "Here.", said the red-head. 'Jackie....' I thought. Blah, Blah... "Larissa Gaines?" said the old guy. "HERE!!" yelled the girl with the pink ends. 'Larissa, eh?' Weird name. A few of the toon teens smiled, enlightened by her happiness. Blah, Blah, Blah, more blah..."Charlie Meyers?" Heeeeeree! Hehehehehehe..." said the freaky one. Ooh, that laugh was annoying. "Micheal Perry?", "Here", said the pink hat. 'And......' I thought, waiting for the greasy head, but I didn't have to wait long. " Miguel Sanchez?", Here." said green hat in a heavy Mexican accent. He rolled his 'R', and all the girls squealed except for Jackie and Larissa. Blah...... "O.K. class, You may go to your first block." ------------------------------------------------------------------------- Whew!!!!!!!!! That was tiring! But I did it!!! ;D
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Post by Larissa Gaines. (: on Feb 13, 2008 19:12:56 GMT -5
oooo incase any of u r wondering, Stupid goes 2 a different school so he wont b in da fic srry Stupid fans........ ;D
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Post by Sewer Weasel on Feb 14, 2008 12:10:44 GMT -5
WHAT?! HOW DARE YOU!!!!!!! THAT'S JUST MEAN!!!!!!!!! *starts growling and pouting at the same time*
(xD)
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