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Post by disneyplease on Apr 30, 2011 15:35:01 GMT -5
It's fine by me, I just Hope Alfie makes it!!!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by cutieweasel on May 4, 2011 16:39:43 GMT -5
Chapter 8
MeanWhile in the Toon Hospital, The Toon Patrol we're waiting see to if Alfie was Alright or not. SmartAss was smoking his cigar then chewed on it. Just then a toon Dog came by them. "Are you SmartAss?" said the Doctor "Ya" said SmartAss. "Is Alfie gonna be okay?" said Wheezy. The Doctor looked down and said, "Im so sorry but there's nothing we can't do im afraid she's goning to die." said The Doctor.
SmartAss bit his cigar and said "Can we see 'er ?" said SmartAss "Yes you may" said The Doctor in a sad tone. He lead them to Alfie's room. The Doctor opened the door for them. "You guy's will be staying here for 30 mintures" said The Doctor. He closed the door. SmartAss run's to Alfie, "Why Alfie......." said SmartAss. Greasy came up to SmartAss and said.
"Im sorry Boss but she has to die it's nature" said Greasy. SmartAss grabbed his Dip gun and walked away."Hey boss where are you going?" said Psycho. SmartAss turned his head to Psycho and said "None of ya business ya mug's are staying with Alfie" said SmartAss. SmartAss left, Greasy put's his hand on Alfie's cheek and said.
"Don't worry Alfie you're going to be okay" said Greasy "Come on Greasy we're going to the cafe" said Wheezy "Coming" said Greasy. Greasy kissed Alfie on the forehead, He smiled and left with the other's MeanWhile it was night time, SmartAss slamed the door and look's around the house. "Come out Alfe I know you're here somewhere" said SmartAss.
Just then he heared a noise inside the closet upstair's. He run's up the stair's to hear what was that noise coming from?. He saw the closet, he opened it and saw the real Alfe tied up. "Alfe what are you doing in there?" said SmartAss "Listin that was not me who stabbed Alfie" said Alfe. SmartAss picked his neck up and pointed his dip gun at him.
"You lier i know that was you" said SmartAss in a angry tone. Just then the fake Alfe was right behind SmartAss. "Behind you" said Alfe. SmartAss turn's around and hit the fake Alfe right on the face. "Two Alfe's what's going on ere?!" said SmartAss.The fake Alfe take's his mask off and it relieved's it's true from.
"Well well if it is it my old enemy SmartAss" said Nico with a grinned smile "NICO so it was you who stabbed my sweetheart" said SmartAss in a angry tone "Yep and that was the funniest thing i did" said Nico. SmartAss kick's Nico but he missed. Nico punch SmartAss on the face. Alfe punche's Nico right in the smotch.
"Go SmartAss i'll distraced him" said Alfe. SmartAss nodded and run's to the Toon Hospital. MeanWhile in the Toon Hospital, Alfie woked up and saw she was in the Hospital. She saw stiches on her body and said. "Man what just happned?" said Alfie. The Doctor came in to her room and saw she was alive. He gapsed and ran to cafe to tell the other's.
MeanWhile, Greasy was drinking coffee and saw the Doctor runing toward's them he stopped and said "Alfie... she's.... alive" said Doctor "Que?" said Greasy "Come with me and see for your selve's" said The Doctor. They ran to Alfie's Room and saw that she was alive. Alfie turn's around and said.
"Hey guy's did ya missed me " said Alfie, She ran to them and give them a group hug. They blushed, They hugged her back. Alfie walk toward's to Greasy. She smiled and said. "Did you kissed me on the forehead" said Alfie "Si and" said Greasy. Alfie kissed Greasy on the forehead, "There now we're even" said Alfie.
Greasy blushed and smiled, Just then SmartAss was right on time. "Smarty" said Alfie. She run's to SmartAss and hugged him tight. SmartAss hugged her back. They both kissed each other. SmartAss broke the kiss, "Im glad you're alright" said SmartAss. "Me too" said Alfie.
But then they heard a loud crash outside of the Toon Hospital they ran to see what was going on?. To be continued...........
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Post by disneyplease on May 4, 2011 18:35:13 GMT -5
OH MY GOSH, She's Alive!!! DisneyPlease!
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Post by cutieweasel on May 4, 2011 18:39:52 GMT -5
Yep and Alfe was innocent he wasn't the who killed Alfie. It was Nico all along
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Post by disneyplease on May 4, 2011 20:37:55 GMT -5
Cool!!! DisneyPlease!
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Post by cutieweasel on May 7, 2011 7:25:38 GMT -5
The Last Chapter
They ran outside and saw Alfe and Nico on the roof attcking each other. SmartAss grabbed a rope and climb on it. Alfe kick's Nico but he missed. Nico punches Alfe, Then he hit's him with his sniper gun. Nico pointed his sniper gun at Alfe. "Why are you doing this?" said Alfe, Nico grinned "You'll find out soon" said Nico. Nico was about to shoot Alfe but then SmartAss attacks Nico. "What" said Nico in shocked. Alfie and the other's help Alfe and Attack Nico. Alfe ran to Alfie and hugged her tight. "Oh Alfie you're alive also that wasn't me who killed you it was...." said Alfe
Alfie hugged Alfe back and said, "I know Smarty told me everything and I forgive you" said Alfie. Nico grabbed Alfie's neck and walk's away slowy. "Drop all of your Dip gun's or this weasel get's it" said Nico. They dropped all of their Dip gun's. Nico grinned. But then Alfe pouched on Nico and they both fall for their death. Alfie and the other's ran down to see if Alfe was alright.
"It's okay im fine" said Alfe. Alfie smiled and hugged him. They all looked at Nico and saw him dead. "We did it we finally killed him" said SmartAss. SmartAss kissed Alfie softly. they both smiled.
3 week's later, SmartAss adopted me and we got married. Alfe decided to stay with us as a family. SmartAss and Alfie kissed each other softly. And that's my story everybody. But what about Nico? don't worry he's dead or is he?.
Meanwhile in the Graveyard, Nico's grave was shocked by a lighting bolt. Just then a hand came out of Nico's grave. Nico laugh like crazy, "This is just the beginning" said Nico with a darkly grin.
THE END?
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Post by disneyplease on May 7, 2011 7:28:28 GMT -5
YAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very Nice CutieWeasel!!!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by cutieweasel on May 7, 2011 7:29:36 GMT -5
Thank you so much im very glad you like my story
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Post by NerdBird on May 14, 2011 18:51:53 GMT -5
Wanna critique?
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Post by cutieweasel on May 14, 2011 20:53:01 GMT -5
Yes
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