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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 2, 2011 12:44:02 GMT -5
This is the aftermath of my previous Story, Birth of Loner
Enjoy the story. Yes the weasels will have more appearance in this one then my last one and there some surprises in this story
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Prologue-A flash of lighting strike down a the harsh rain came down like the gravity was put in pushed mode, the lighting flashed across the bridge the water were rough that not even a boat will be safe the weather started getting more and more rough in the distance was a city half of the power were out while some areas had light a quick flash of something and it went black a police offer in the pouring rain with a flashlight was scared out of his skin
“What is that thing?!” he asked
In another part of the city we see pipes in all different directions as we go up we see a huge iron robot which was bigger then an Eiffel Tower inside the robot was a bubble like sphere
“Armageddon God, functioning normally” said a voice
“Commencing operation” said another voice
Sparks of electrical were trapped in the object as it cuts too the outside the small crack in between the eye was lighting up the cop fled in fear as he saw the huge robot the robot’s eyes open and shot out a flash of light, killing the officer as well as the whole areas was gone in a flash the place was blazing
“Stage 1 testing, complete, proceeding to stage 2” said a voice
Just then a emergency sign flashed red
“What’s wrong?” asked another voice
“We can’t control the energy output” electrical lights were going crazy in the sphere “Energy flow reaching critical level! Output still rising” The electric sparks from the horn outside the robot flickered faintly “we can’t control any of the systems” Inside one of the robots were two screens on showing the blazing city and on the other one a young boy wearing a yellow coat had a worry face “We’ve failed” said the voice in a panic
“So, we really do need him. We need the boy” an eye open “Ain!” he said
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Post by choperred18 on Mar 2, 2011 15:08:26 GMT -5
I got a feeling this is going too be good or bad
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 2, 2011 16:41:07 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 2, 2011 16:56:21 GMT -5
((Me too but with this one is goign to take more time
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Post by choperred18 on Mar 3, 2011 13:23:24 GMT -5
Kiki take your time
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 5, 2011 23:45:50 GMT -5
thanks
Chapter 2-The sphere broke into pieces and outside of the robot was a huge white bomb flash and destroyed the entire town bridge and all. The scene now was bright as the sun was high in the sky, the air was fresh and crisps, the grebe hills were singing as the white fluffy cloud flew through the light blue sky we hear a motorcycle, on a widening road was a news paper and on it said “Disaster at Dawn!” the bike ran through the news paper as flying shadows were fallowing it. The things in the sky were robotic ray firing missiles at the bike. The driver dodge it and up close we see Kiki only that her look was a little different, her hair was more shorter and her fur was a little more lighter, She had determination on her face the black cloud covered half of the road the ray were still after Kiki, she turn her head and sitting in the passenger seat was a young woman in her early 20’s with jet black hair holding a six year old boy looking into space like he is not even in tune with this world they fired more at Kiki but they missed they kept firing as the bike swerve in a 360 degree spin and went into a matrix mode, it slowed moved as it barely misses them and went charging at them and on the side of the bike where sharp blades and sliced through one of them causing it too split into two and blew up they kept firing and the girl closed her eyes as the little boy looked at her, Kiki quickly looked back then at front and saw four more in front of her she speed up causing the flying ray colliding into each other, they were in the safe zone Kiki looked back too make sure and as she looked ahead she saw two flying robotic jellyfish and shot out lighting at them Kiki went through the middle of it they were hovering above them
“Get your head down!” said Kiki too them
She did and Kiki cranked the speed up they try a body slammed but missed and smashed into the ground they went through the dark tunnel with them hot on there trails out from back of her bike released black smoke causing them too have a malfunction. Cuts to The bike resting as Kiki, the young woman and the young boy were resting
“Let’s rest here for a while, then we’ll go” said Kiki
“I’m sorry” said the young women in a soft husky voice
Kiki looked at her as she held the little boy close
“Meeting us got you involved in all this” she said
“Who are those guys, anyway? Why are they after you?” asked Kiki
She looked at Kiki with her blue eyes that were filled with sadness and looked down blinked with out saying a word, Kiki blinked as she got it turn her head too the little boy
“Is it about him?” asked Kiki
Her eyes flutter again and looks at Kiki
“This boy’s…his father is…” she briefly stopped “He’s a judge named Judge Doom” she said
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Post by PsychoJr on Mar 6, 2011 0:45:27 GMT -5
wow nice start kiki keep going and dont rush yourself.
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Post by disneyplease on Mar 6, 2011 0:54:38 GMT -5
now this is getting ironic!!!  DisneyPlease! |
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 6, 2011 0:56:45 GMT -5
ya who knew Doom had a son
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 7, 2011 16:53:08 GMT -5
thank guys
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 8, 2011 21:42:06 GMT -5
Chapter 3-Kiki’s eyes widen as a quick flashback occurred in her mind as a brief image of him appeared just then a huge red foot stomped down on the grass Kiki gasp as she quickly saw a crab like robot his claws swung at Kiki sending her flying in the bushes another one joined as the young woman was helpless and then another red cab robot came she slowly walked back as Kiki was watching one was about too grab her but Kiki jumped high in the sky and kicked one of the glass eyes and landed on the ground she karate chop it’s leg and it fell down the other went too grab Kiki but she quickly dodge it she leaped and punched it in the stomach Kiki quickly stopped as it filers bullets at her just then the claw bragged Kiki squeezing her Kiki saw the young girl back into the tree as the crab went closer too her
“CHANG!” Shouted Kiki as she crosses her arm on her shoulders she transform into her darker self only it was more tamed
The crab robot blew up as Kiki was high in the sky shooting down through the other crab robot landed in front of her and the boy
“K-Kiki…?” she said in a shocking and yet scared voice
Kiki looked at her
“Wait here, Sayna please” said Kiki as she got up
She turn too face them now there were at least twelve of them Kiki went full ahead at them she used her claws which are sharper then before and went though one of them they fired at her but she got under one of them and sliced it’s legs causing it too fall she kicked one of them as one of the claws hits Kiki causing her too crash in the ground Kiki got on her knees and looked at them, they fired at her, Kiki used her arm too block it Kiki quickly did a barrel roll the scene went into a graphic map mode of the crab robots
“Wh-What’s this?” Kiki asked herself
Sparks came from the crabs bodies they fired at her, Kiki jumped in the air attacking the weak spots it fired rapidly at Kiki only too sending her back
“Kiki” she said
They got closer too them, Kiki was analyzing them she waited as they got closer and closer too them Kiki pressed something and in came her bike it was on auto pilot the blades came from the side and sliced through the crab legs
“Get on” said Kiki too them
“Right” she said
They got on she swirled through them and released the black smoke again causing them too got crazy and had a brake down, Kiki was following the map in her head the sun was setting as the setting sun lights the sky painting the sky with dark colors they were driving for hours, Sayna didn’t say a word as we fade the full moon was out Kiki’s bike used her high beams too shine in the night and sees an old broken gate
“Where are we?” Sayna asked
“I don’t know…but”
The map in Kiki’s head was blinking north the moon was high in the night sky
“Please wait here for a while” said Kiki
Sayna was worried
“Don’t worry I promise I’ll come back” said Kiki as she walked in the Chinese house
Sayna was worried for Kiki. Kiki walked on the hard wooden floor she looked at a Buddha statue
“What’s…?”
Kiki stilled looking at the Statue The Buddha statue was like looking at her the air was silent Kiki just started at the statue with out blinking just then a pair of glowing yellow eyes and the Buddha statue opening showing an identical male mink Kiki was stun at this he was in his dark form
“Who are you?” Kiki asked
“Who the h*** ate you?” he asked Kiki
“Me? i…I’m Kiki” she said
“Kiki? You can call me Riki” he said
“Riki? Wait you mean you’re a…” asked Kiki
“Hold it you too?” he asked Kiki
Kiki was in her other form Riki crossed his arms and what he looks like is that his hair was dark blue that covered one eye, green eyes and Midnight dark blue fur
“At last, you’ve come” said a voice
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Post by PsychoJr on Mar 8, 2011 22:33:10 GMT -5
wow not kiki keep going
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 8, 2011 22:36:57 GMT -5
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Post by PsychoJr on Mar 8, 2011 22:40:40 GMT -5
hahah whoops forgot a word. i meant to say
wow not bad kiki keep going.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 8, 2011 22:42:13 GMT -5
i know **laugh**
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