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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 1, 2011 20:11:07 GMT -5
hehehe oh AJ **roll eyes** nice job so far Fisi
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Post by Fisi on Mar 1, 2011 20:11:38 GMT -5
Thanks.
Yah, I know how your Aj could be so I decided why not.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 1, 2011 20:12:28 GMT -5
hahaha i like it
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Post by Fisi on Mar 1, 2011 20:19:36 GMT -5
Yah.
I feel like I have alot of granmar mistakes. I want to fix them but then again I'm tired from all the work I have
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 1, 2011 20:20:41 GMT -5
hay it's still good i love how you got AJ's personality down
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Post by disneyplease on Mar 1, 2011 20:21:01 GMT -5
hmm, this story is startting to look interesting
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Mar 1, 2011 20:23:52 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Post by disneyplease on Mar 1, 2011 20:32:39 GMT -5
You're welcome!!! ^_^
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Mar 1, 2011 20:39:08 GMT -5
KiKi: Yah, I guess.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Mar 1, 2011 20:52:15 GMT -5
keep it up
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Post by Fisi on Mar 2, 2011 16:28:21 GMT -5
I will.
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Post by Fisi on Mar 3, 2011 16:15:57 GMT -5
Anyone else?
Sorry. I feel like no one is sharing any comments yet they kept having the nerve to tell me to do that in there's. <3
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Post by choperred18 on Mar 3, 2011 16:18:28 GMT -5
Hmm...ya know Fisi this is not half bad
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Post by Fisi on Mar 3, 2011 16:25:48 GMT -5
Thanks. Is there anything wrong with it?
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Post by choperred18 on Mar 3, 2011 16:36:46 GMT -5
Not really it's nice the pilot is good and you nail the characters down
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