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Post by disneyplease on Jan 22, 2011 13:07:10 GMT -5
Alright folks, the next chapter is the the chapter that will have you guys at the edge of yer seats!!! DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 22, 2011 13:48:32 GMT -5
Cool!
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 23, 2011 23:43:01 GMT -5
Chapter 5
After closing the door, Abby clicked on her flashlight, and walked towards the little forest in her yard. It was quiet and the only sounds that could be heard was the sounds of the crickets and the owls, and the only other light outside was the full moon in the sky.
Abby then heard something in the bushes, so she quietly crept towards them, but when peared through them , three sets of yellow, Animated eyes blazed.
Abby screamed while falling on the ground backwards, landing on her behind. She scooted back abit in time to see three familiar cartoon Hyena's pear out of the bushes, laughing.
" Well, well, Banzai what have we got here" said Shenzi
" I do'nt know Shenzi, uh..What do you think Ed" said Banzi, but Ed only responded by laughing
"yeah, thats what I was thinkin', a little puny Human kid!" said Banzai with an evil grin
As the hyena's were coming closer towards Abby, Abby could feel fear building up within her.
" Aw, poor baby's scared" taunted Shenzi as she was sensing Abby's fear
Not knowing what else to do, Abby threw her flashlight at the Hyena's, but missed.
" HA!, is that all you got Honey?!" laughed Shenzi as did the other hyena's.
Abby panicked, then got back up on her feet and ran
" Alright boys, time to play Fetch!" said Shenzi
Then the hyena's ran after Abby. Abby ran and ran, trying to get away from these three, when suddenly she bumped into another person, causing her to land back on the ground. When Abby looked up to see who it was, her eyes widened when she saw it was another familiar animated Villain.
" Well swoggle mi eyes" said Captain Hook as he bent down and used his hand replacing hook to hoist Abby up in the air by the straps of her dress. " A pleasure it is to finally capture you, Ms. Abigail"
As she was hanging in the air, Abby was surprized to hear Hook say that. ' He knows my name?' she asked herself.
" Mr. Smee" called Captain Hook as Mr. Smee appeared with trunk that was Abby's size, and opened it.
" And now it is time to take you to our home my dear" said Hook
Then he dropped Abby in the trunk and slammed it shut.
" Well Mr. Smee, looks like our guest is ready for the trip" complimented Hook
" AH Man, we was havin' fun chasin' the kid here" said Banzai
" Just Shut up and get on the ship you bilge rats" said Hook
Then Hook and the Hyena's followed by Mr. Smee who carried the trunk containing Abby got aboard Hooks flying ship
"Hoist the ancher and set the sails, we be taking off" Hook yelled to his crew who obeyed
and soon, the ship was off the ground and flying towards the second star to the right, which soon took the ship to the world where all Disney things exist.
" Ahh, Mr. Smee" called Hook
"Y-yes Cap'm?" stuttered Mr. Smee
" Get me in contact with Maleficent, I want her to know that we have accomplished the mission" said Hook
"Aye Sir" said Smee, who then Accidently pushed the the trunk that Abby was in towards the plank
" Somebody Stop that trunk" yelled Hook
Hook's crew and the hyena's tried to stop the trunk but failed. And to make matters worse, the ship hit an air bump while flying, which caused the trunk to roll off the plank and fall from the ship.
As the trunk fell in the sky, Abby screamed
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 23, 2011 23:57:17 GMT -5
Oooooo. Gettin good!
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Post by disneyplease on Feb 6, 2011 21:16:37 GMT -5
Chapter 6
Inside the trunk, Abby screamed as she felt the trunk falling, and by how the trunk was falling down faster, she was able to tell that she was getting close to the ground.
But just when she thought that she was going to crash, the trunk landed on something soft, which then made the trunk land on the ground with a thud, and roll to one of its sides.
Five minutes after the landing, Abby sat curled in a ball inside the trunk, unsure of what to do, but then she heard a slight creek, then she saw that the lid of the trunk was open abit, and it was like a door.
Abby pushed the lid, and crawled out of the trunk, only to find herself in an animated colorful forrest. It amazed her.
"what is this place?" Abby asked herself as she got up
"well you're not in your world anymore" said a familiar voice
"who said that?" called out Abby
"up here in the tree" said the voice
Abby then looked up, to find a huge grin in the tree, and it revealed to be a character that Abby knew well
" Why you're the Chesire Cat from 'Alice in Wonderland'! " said Abby
" Yes, and Ive been told to take you somewhere if I were to see you" said the Chesire Cat
" take me where?" asked Abby
"right through here" said the Chesire cat as he pulled a branch on the tree, and just like in Alice in Wonderland, a door way appeared in the tree.
Abby took a gulp and walked through it, once she entered, the door way vanished, and Abby was in an open empty space.
Then a bright light shined above Abby . She looked up to find a a beautiful night sky with stars shining bright. Though one star in particular grew brighter, and before Abby knew it, an even brighter light appeared infront of her, then there stood a beautiful familiar Fairy.
" Y-You're the Blue Fairy from 'Pinnochio' " said Abby
" Thats right, Abigail" said the Blue Fairy with a smile
" You know my name?" asked Abby
" Of course, we know the names of all human children such as yourself " said the Blue Fairy
" We?" asked Abby
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Post by theamericanmarten on Feb 6, 2011 23:17:23 GMT -5
Ooooo. Interesting so far.
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Post by PsychoJr on Feb 10, 2011 0:01:46 GMT -5
not bad
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Post by disneyplease on Feb 10, 2011 10:29:14 GMT -5
Why Thank you Jr!!!
this is the first time you ever read one of my Disney fics, and Im happy!!! ^_^
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