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Post by disneyplease on Jan 20, 2011 18:35:10 GMT -5
Im still working on a story for Veruca
you said to put the character first before the story
what am I doing wrong now?
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Jan 20, 2011 18:38:01 GMT -5
First your working on Veruca then a teenage girl.
Which one you gonna do for pete sake?
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 20, 2011 18:42:18 GMT -5
Oh, well the teenage girl for a different story I've decided to focus on later
right now I feel like I wannah work on a few things with Veruca, since she's diferent then most little girls I made in the past
so you're not going to be hearing about the teenaged girl for a while
unless you want to hear what I got on her
DisneyPlease!
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Post by The Forgoten One on Jan 20, 2011 18:43:27 GMT -5
What about your Cat OC?
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 20, 2011 18:46:00 GMT -5
Faline?
Im still working on her
DisneyPlease!
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Post by The Forgoten One on Jan 20, 2011 18:47:03 GMT -5
then why don't you work on her first before you work on any other of your OCS
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 20, 2011 19:44:19 GMT -5
but all I got on Faline is that she was a foster kid, and when her foster father was killed she suffered grief and anger, which gave her temper problems, and the only flaws I got for her are her temper problems, her stubborness, and her cream addiction. And the only quirk I can come up for her is clenching her fists
the minute I go back and say this is what I got, everyone, especially Fisi, is going to say that I have nothing
and that Im complete failure
DisneyPlease!
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Post by The Forgoten One on Jan 20, 2011 19:47:57 GMT -5
it takes time for OC'S too be good
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 20, 2011 19:49:52 GMT -5
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 20, 2011 19:54:49 GMT -5
it also feels crushing and humiliating when you think what you got is good turns out to be completely bad in everybody's opinion
but if it makes everyone here happy, fine, I'll go back to Faline, even though Im probably gonnah screw up!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Jan 20, 2011 20:15:46 GMT -5
Keep acting like your worthless and you'll soon turn into one.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Jan 20, 2011 20:26:44 GMT -5
Disneyplease don't think like that you have put time and effort into your character
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 20, 2011 21:42:50 GMT -5
well, now what do I do  really, what do I do DisneyPlease! |
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Post by Fisi on Jan 20, 2011 22:02:58 GMT -5
How about this:
You can stop acting like an idiot and actually do something like you did with Faline about that psychology book. I'm not saying you should use the book all the time, I'm saying actually work hard for your OC. Your OC isn't just like picking out a clothing.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 22, 2011 16:59:02 GMT -5
Alright folks, for Veruca, I got a better idea instead of her being a human kid, I decided to make her a toon kid though the problem is, I do'nt know what kind of animal to make her a weasel kit, or a little racoon which of the 2 do you guys like better, a weasel Kit or a little racoon I would really like to know which animal you guys like DisneyPlease! |
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