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Post by Lola on Jan 6, 2011 20:27:18 GMT -5
I actually like #2
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 6, 2011 21:14:53 GMT -5
wow, #2, really?!
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 7, 2011 23:07:54 GMT -5
actually folks, I think I got an even better idea
how about I Combine those idea's
make the girl in #2 be Maggie, and let her be working as Roger Rabbits assistant at his job at the Maroon Cartoon studio's, and let what happened to the girl in #2 be Maggies past
what do y'all think ?!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 7, 2011 23:14:12 GMT -5
That would be great, DP!
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 11, 2011 15:24:31 GMT -5
Ok
just like what I did for Faline, I used that psychology book for Maggie
Maggie was Judge Dooms step daughter, and she was the victim of child abuse, so she suffers the symptoms that most child abuse victims suffer
nervousness, diminished self esteem, shame, and fear
and even at the age of 19, and though she longer had to live with Doom, AND the weasels, she still has these symptoms
yeah, she had to live with Doom and the weasels from the age of 11 al the way up to the age of 18
but NO, she does'nt brag about. Heck, Maggie prefers to keep her past with Doom a secret.
though her symptoms may get to her , she tries to not let her memories interact with work
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 12, 2011 0:18:47 GMT -5
Wow.
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Post by Fisi on Jan 12, 2011 12:41:26 GMT -5
ok and please try to understand that both OC's for these fics are still in progress and just so you guys know, these OC's are both women, and in their stories they get NO love interests whatsoever and again both of these idea's are for a fic that is the Movie 'Who framed Roger Rabbit', it just as an OC and here they are #1: this OC is Roger Rabbit female Human assistant (for his work at the Maroon Cartoon Studios), Margarete, or Maggie, who is a young woman at the age of 19, and she's the kind of person that wants to please everyone. She is sometimes doubtful, sad, and she prefers to keep certain opinions to herself, but thats due to shyness. And though she tries to be perfect, she's nowhere near the meaning of the word, for she falls behind certain things, she often gets distracted, and she's abit clumsy. But Maggie is fond of working with Roger, heck she thinks he's the best toon she could've ever worked with, he's even one of the people that give Maggie confidence in herself #2: for those of you who remember that old idea that I had about girl who's wealthy widowed mother married Judge Doom, and after the mother dies, Doom and the weasels take over everything and the girl becomes their house maid. Well, for this idea, Im thinking maybe that at the time that the movie takes place, the girl is grown up, and she has a job at the Ink & Paint club as a waitress, and she is a close friend of Jessica Rabbit and her husband, Roger Rabbit. And when she hears that Roger is framed for murder, she it's going to be hard avoiding her Step Father, but when she hears that Valient is going to try to do something, she takes his side and as I said before, these idea's are still in progress so what do you guys think? :/ I think you need alot of work on. DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Jan 12, 2011 12:41:51 GMT -5
:/ I think you need alot of work on.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 13, 2011 18:36:31 GMT -5
really? whats wrong DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Jan 13, 2011 18:54:33 GMT -5
Well, you need to work on the OC first before you decide on what to do with them with the story. The more you know about your OC, the better ideas will come to you originally.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 14, 2011 10:23:29 GMT -5
well, like I did with my Faline, I used the psychology book I got from the library considering that Maggie is Judge Doom's abused Step daughter by the way, Im starting to have second thoughts of what Maggies name should be, for I have one other choice for her first name which do you guys think should be her name, Maggie which is short for Marguerite, or Angela DisneyPlease!
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Post by Fisi on Jan 14, 2011 15:45:59 GMT -5
Whatever name it is, fine by me. I really don't care for name unless there something else with it.
Anyway, just because you used a book on her feelings doesn't mean you "completed" your OC. It takes more then a psychology book.
You have to find quirks, flaws, backstory, and reasons to back it up. The psychology book is necessary to use at times.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 14, 2011 18:44:30 GMT -5
well in for the name, I think Im now going to with Angela
as for the rest
I did come up with a backstory, besides the fact that she is Judge Dooms step daughter and she was abused by him and the weasels
and I think I got a few things for her flaws and quirks
when I was reading that book her the kind of thing that she went through, the information gave me an idea
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Post by Fisi on Jan 14, 2011 18:48:25 GMT -5
Well, tell me the backstory and the ideas. Unless you don't have it and your just all talk.
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Post by disneyplease on Jan 14, 2011 19:57:09 GMT -5
ok then
heres Angela's back story
Angela's full Name is Angela K Wincot, and her Mother was a Wealthy widow. They were not exactly rich, but they did have a large amount of Money. Then when Angela was 10, her mother met Judge Doom. Doom and Angela's mother started out dating for months, then they married a year later. So Doom along with the weasels moved into Angela's mother's house. All seemed fine but a few months after, Angela's mother was found DEAD in the kitchen, Poisoned.
Now the Police thought the widow killed herself by accident, for she often made tea in the morning to wake up and in the cabinet where she kept sugar was also rat poison, so out of tiredness, she probably put in rat poison with out realizing it.
But the truth is, it was'nt an accidental suicide, it was murder.
nevertheless, because Angela had no other relatives, as her step father, Judge Doom and the weasels won custody of her, and that was when their true nature was revealed to Angela, Cold, cruel, and pure black hearted. As Angela lived with them, she was emotionally, verbally, and Physically abused.
And soon, Doom and the weasels claimed everything that belonged to Angela's mother, the house, the fortune, everything (and the truth is, Angela was supposed to inherit her mothers things first, not Doom or the weasels). Then Finally, byt the time that Angela was 12 years old, she was forced to become the house maid.
I know, quite a cinderella story, but unlike Cinderella, Angela did'nt get rescued. She had to live with Doom and the weasels as their 'slave' for 6 years. By the time that she turned 18, she no longer had to live with her step father, and she was given very little to start a new life. Though she was free, Doom and the weasels never left her be.
Angela got a very tiny apartment for a home, but she got a job at the Maroon cartoons studio that she actually liked, she is Roger Rabbits assitant.
as for what I got for flaws heres what I got
and some of these flaws come from the symptoms she got from when she was abused
she's very nervous around others (mostly grown men), and she's clumsy
DisneyPlease!
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