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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 6, 2010 20:34:38 GMT -5
Chapter 4
While the weasels were on their "walk," Goldilocks was walking along the sidewalks of Toontown. Just then, she saw a strange path leading to the Toon Patrol Headquarters. "Where does this path lead to?" she asked a few toons. "That leads to where these nasty weasels live," said a toon man. "Yeah," said a little girl, "We toons have to stay away from them, or they'll spray us with dip." "What's dip?" Goldie asked. "Dip is a toon's worst nightmare," said a bird, "It melts toons away so they'll NEVER come back to life! Please, stay away from the weasels!" But all Goldilocks heard was, "Blah, blah, blah, blah." The little girl then wandered to the Headquarters to cause trouble.
To be continued...
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Post by disneyplease on Dec 6, 2010 21:23:38 GMT -5
OH BOY I can't wait to see what happens next
hope the next chapter comes soon
DisneyPlease!
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Post by The Unknown on Dec 6, 2010 21:46:50 GMT -5
This is super cute! Can't wait to see what kind of trouble Goldilocks has in store for the Toon Patrol. Keep up the good work! :-)
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 6, 2010 22:55:20 GMT -5
Thanks, ladies!
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 12, 2010 16:14:51 GMT -5
can't wait
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 21, 2010 19:35:46 GMT -5
Chapter 5
When Goldilocks went inside the headquarters, she noticed fur scattered everywhere. "Geez," she told herself, "Someone must have a lot of pets!" In the kitchen, she noticed five bowls of clam chowder. Goldilocks took a bite out of Smart A**'s bowl. "Ouch!" she cried, holding onto her cheeks, "This clam chowder is TOO hot!" Next, Goldie took a slurp from Greasy's bowl. "WATER!!" Goldilocks cried, "This chowder is even hotter!! It must have hot salsa in it!" And sure enough, Greasy's chowder DID have some hot salsa. Next, the little girl took a bite from Psycho's bowl. "Yuck," she said, "Too cold!" Then she had some from Wheezy's chowder. "EEWWWWWWWW!!" Goldilocks cried, "This chowder has cigarette butts in it!!!" Finally, Goldilocks had some of Stupid's chowder. "Mmmmmmm," said Goldilocks, "This is just right! I might add just a little bit of pepper to it." So she did. And she ate up all of Stupid's clam chowder. Then Goldilocks wondered what to do next...
To be continued...
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Post by disneyplease on Dec 21, 2010 19:39:41 GMT -5
OHHHHH BOOOOOOOOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Im already excited to see what the weasels are going to do
KEEP TYPING GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 21, 2010 19:42:53 GMT -5
THANKS!!! ;D
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 21, 2010 20:40:01 GMT -5
nice
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Post by theamericanmarten on Dec 21, 2010 20:50:03 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by The Forgoten One on Dec 21, 2010 20:53:56 GMT -5
welcome
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 13, 2011 20:47:54 GMT -5
Chapter 6
Goldilocks then went into the living room. She noticed five couches, all covered with the weasels' shredded fur. "Gee whiz," she wondered, "Whoever lives here has REALLY messy pets! Oh well, I think I might sit down."
First, Goldie sat down in Smart A**'s couch. It was too hard, so hard that Goldilocks bruised her little behind. Next, she tried Greasy's couch. But it had too many pictures of Hispanic showgirls from Mexico, Puerto Rico, Costa Rica, Argentina, and Venezuela. Then she tried Psycho's couch. But it was all torn up with pillows and feathers everywhere. "That must be one violent dog," Goldie thought. So she decided to try Wheezy's couch. That couch had cigarette butts, ash trays, and a strong tobacco scent. Goldilocks coughed and said, "Ewwww!" Finally, she sat in Stupid's couch. It felt just right that Goldilocks bounced so much on it in joy that...
...She fell right through it! After which, Goldie felt a little sweaty and dirty that she decided to go take a little bath upstairs...
To be continued...
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Post by Mellow on Jan 14, 2011 0:15:06 GMT -5
Keep it UP!!!!!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Jan 14, 2011 1:34:59 GMT -5
Thanks! And for the previous chapter, I meant chapter SIX, not FIVE!!  Sorry! ;D ;D |
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Post by Mellow on Jan 14, 2011 1:38:04 GMT -5
Perfectly All Right.  |
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Sorry! ;D ;D