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Post by Lola on Oct 26, 2010 20:05:24 GMT -5
So what if theres this toon lets say a teenage girl who appears at the toon patrols warehouse when they come back from something or she just comes in and sits herself down liek she owns the place. Why you may ask well she is actually Judge Doom's niece or daughter so she inherits everything from him...that includes his job. Well what do you think. I couldn't stay away from writing I don't exactly know which to be what so thats why i added a bunch of options. I MIGHT write it.
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 26, 2010 20:10:04 GMT -5
I do'nt know about the part of doom, But I LIKE the idea of a teenage girl coming into the weasels place infact, I think I might have an idea for you on this! DisneyPlease!
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Post by Lola on Oct 26, 2010 20:10:33 GMT -5
Okay, shoot
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 26, 2010 20:35:24 GMT -5
well, how about the teenage girl is a street urchin and she has nowhere to live, and as she is walking it is starting to rain, then she finds the warehouse, so she goes in, with no consideration what so ever, but just when she is comfortable in there, the weasels bust her. She tries to escape as the weasels try to catch her, then it leads to this scene (which was inspired by a scene from the movie 'Space balls')
the girl tries to knock Smartguy out by pinching his neck, but nothing happens
Smartguy: what da heck are ya doin'
Girl: (nervously) the Vulchan neck pinch thing
Smartguy: no, no, no, yer doing it wrong, ya got WAY too high, it's right 'ere, where da shoulder meets da neck, plus yer suppose ta attack from behind, like this....
then he does it to her, knocking her out cold
then when the girl wakes up, she find herself tied to a chair and gagged, and the weasels interogate her, for Smartguy thinks that if she's rich then maybe they can hold her for ransom, but he's not happy when he learns that she not a rich kid, but a street urchin. Then they decided to torture her for a while, then they tell her that since she picked their place to crash in, this is her new home now, whether she likes it or not!
well whaddya think?
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Lola on Oct 26, 2010 21:00:22 GMT -5
Yeah but she's suppose to be in control like i said she doesn't take any crap. And i don't want to do any more torturing things because i am out of those. And also the last part, i used for my other fic so i wanted to do something different.
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 26, 2010 21:43:17 GMT -5
Oh, okay
well since she's a teenager, how about she gives the weasels an attitude, all leading up to them (mostly Smartguy) calling her a spoiled Brat or something like that
DisneyPlease!
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 26, 2010 22:09:08 GMT -5
That idea sounds kool.
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Post by Lola on Oct 27, 2010 13:41:56 GMT -5
which one?
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Post by Fisi on Oct 27, 2010 16:26:42 GMT -5
No offense, DisneyPlease, but why would she do that if she's the daughter of Doom? The weasels would have to listen to her.
I know your giving her ideas, but the one's you just told her sounds like you want her to do it for comedy. I'm not trying to be mean, I'm giving my opinion, it's not really funny. I can't really see Smartguy doing that, Stupid yes, Smartguy, no way.
I want to hear more of the idea from Superfreak to see how the idea goes. Only to see the results.
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Post by theamericanmarten on Oct 27, 2010 16:33:25 GMT -5
So what if theres this toon lets say a teenage girl who appears at the toon patrols warehouse when they come back from something or she just comes in and sits herself down liek she owns the place. Why you may ask well she is actually Judge Doom's niece or daughter so she inherits everything from him...that includes his job. Well what do you think. I couldn't stay away from writing I don't exactly know which to be what so thats why i added a bunch of options. I MIGHT write it. This one.
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Post by Lola on Oct 27, 2010 18:20:20 GMT -5
thats actually all i have lol i can't really think of any things else at this moment
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Post by Fisi on Oct 27, 2010 18:21:27 GMT -5
Ok, take your time.
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Post by Lola on Oct 27, 2010 19:59:31 GMT -5
Let's see...maybe she could either stumble upon it or she finds out about doom and tracks down the family tree and finds him because her mother or aunt never told her so thats how she found out or she has been waiting to do this for a while and she finally gets the chance? I don't know I'm just spitting out ideas
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Post by disneyplease on Oct 27, 2010 20:10:32 GMT -5
I think I have an idea of my her mother or aunt did'nt tell her, maybe because of Shame and fear
(would'nt you feel ashamed or frightened if you knew someone in the family that was a bad person and did bad stuff)
DisneyPlease!
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Post by Lola on Oct 27, 2010 20:13:03 GMT -5
yeah that was one of the reasons
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