DisneyLand Secrets

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Disclaimer: I do Not own any Disney characters or anything in DisneyLand, I Only own Dorothy Archer and her Family, Bruno Perkins, mr. Finster, and my own biography for a Non real Disney Villain Ride!



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" My name is Dorothy Archer, my Mom is an imagineer in DisneyLand, and so is my Dad, well.., that was before he disappeared on a business trip to one of the international Disney Land parks. Thats right, we live in DisneyLand, the happiest place on earth that Walt Disney himself walked through. For as long as I can remember, there has been some talk that ever since DisneyLand opened to the people, Disney's beliefs has created it's own magic, bringing ALL Disney characters to life, whether they were in the parks attractions or not. Along the magic, there is also the aid of the belief and laughter from every child that comes to the park that grants the characters immortality in return. Little did I know that, when I was 10 years old, I was about to discover that all of it was true. And that is the beginning of my story............................................."








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Chapter 1



It was a bright day in the magic kingdom in DisneyLand. In a monorail train, a little girl was day dreaming while looking out the window. The girls name was Dorothy Archer , who was about 10 years old, had Dark blonde hair, saphire blue blue eyes, and pale skin. Dorothy actually lives in DisneyLand, for both of her parents were imagineers. Infact, her Father, Rick Archer, was the most respected imagineer in the park, but when Dorothy was 5, he got called to one of the international Disney Parks on business, and Vanished with out a trace. But Dorothy remains certain that her father is alive and somewhere out there.

" You just can't keep your eyes off the park can you" said Dorothy's mother, Juliet Archer, with contempt, interupting Dorothy's thoughts, " you bet I can't Mom".

Then the Monorail stopped, reaching it's destination, the magic Kingdom. All the passengers got off.

" Bye sweety, be careful, and if you're going to one of the shows tonight come home first" called Juliet as she headed off for work as her daughter took off to roam the park.

" I Will Mom" Dorothy called back, then she rushed through the Park.


When she got to the New Orleans Square, and wondered through a cafe area, she saw a little boy by the boufay table. As she got closer, she was able to see that the boy was about her age and quite fat, with hazel brown hair, wearing a green greyish button up shirt with blue jeans and black sneakers. Dorothy saw that the boy was helping himself to the food on the table.

" What're you doing?" asked Dorothy.

Her voice took the boy by surprise, but then he answered, in a BRITISH Accent " there are chocolate chips all round these cakes" then he picked one up to give it to Dorothy, " they're really good".

"Uh... no thanks, My names Dorothy, Dorothy Archer" she said sticking out her hand. The boy put the cake down, " Bruno Perkins" he said while shaking her hand.

" of course these cucumber sandwiches are good too, but they're more delicious with butter instead of fish paste, how much poket money do you get, My dad's rich but he's very tight, we've got 9 cars, anways, tonight Im going to the Fantasmic show, would you like to come?".

"Sure " answered Dorothy.

" Hello kids" said a waitress, placing some more food on the table. As Dorothy left she could hear what Bruno was saying, " I hope thers butter in the sandwiches today, I really do hate fish paste....., ah you got those marvelous cakes again"


As Dorothy was walking by, she suddenly stopped when she laid her eyes on Villain Mountain, the ride that was fully built but was NEVER OPENED. Dorothy Walked over to the gates, gripped the bars of the gate and leaned her face in to look through it. Dorothy always wondered why this ride never opened. She tried to ask her mother why, but her mother always said the same thing like, there was some problems with it or the head of the imagineering department thought it would be to scary for younger kids or Disney Land could'nt afford to open it. Dorothy sighed, and continued to walk through the magic kingdom. Someday she'll learn why it never opened.


Later at night, the Fantasmic show was starting, Dorothy sat next to Bruno, who was helping himself to alot of snacks while watching the show. So far the show was great, then it led to the scene where Mickey Mouse fights off Maleficent in dragon form, Then before Mickey could do his big scene, Fire came out of the dragon and nearly hit Mickey, causing him to fall in the water.

" Thats not part of the show, is it?" asked Bruno.

" Not most likely, Mickey usually Wins!" claimed Dorothy as she stared at what happened with wide eyes. Mickey was alright, just wet as he crawled back up the stage. Things looked abit grim.

" Something tells me this can't be good" said Bruno as he buried his face on Dorothy's shoulder and wrapped his arms around her, " is She going to win?".

"Unless Mickey does something, without a doubt" said Dorothy.

The Dragon once again tried to fire at Mickey, but missed. This was not good, then not being able to hold it in any longer, Dorothy Stood up and shouted " Come on Mickey you can do it".

The Dragon stopped what it was doing and the head turned towards her, it nearly made Dorothy yelp, but she did'nt care, she kept shouting. Then Mickey finally defeated Maleficent, and then came the big finale.


After the show Dorothy went back to her hotel room in the DisneyLand Hotel, where her mother was busy.

" Hi honey, how was the show", "it was alright I guess" said Dorothy.

" You guess?" questioned her mother.

" Well at the part with Maleficent as the dragon, she actually fired at Mickey for the first time" explained Dorothy.

" Oh Im sure that the people who work on the show just decided to try something new" her mother said simply.

Dorothy shrugged, but she could of sweared that there was something about the Dragon that seemed REAL, especially when it's head turned DIRECTLY to her.

" By the way" interupted her mother, " this week Im going to be busy, so I arrainged for you to stay with Mr. Finster for the week, you remember him dont you Dorothy?".

" Of course I do, Mom" said Dorothy.

Mr. Finster was a RETIRED imagineer who lives here in the park, and has even worked for Walt Disney Himself.





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the part with the dragon firing at Mickey in the Fantasmic show was inspired By my FAVORITE Book, ' Kingdom Keepers: Disney after Dark' by Ridley Pearson






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Chapter 2



The next morning, Dorothy and her mother walked all the way to the New Orleans Square where Mr. Finster's apartment was. They entered a building, took the elevator up to the third floor, walked down a hallway, stoped at room number 55, rang the doorbell, and it opened revealing an old man somewhere in his seventies, had white hair that was starting to thin on the very top of his head, and was slightly chubby around the middle but nowhere else.

"Hi mr. Finster how're you" said Dorothy's mother as she and mr. Finster hugged for a few seconds.

" Ah Juliet, you still look as beautiful as you did when you and Rick came to work in this park" said mr. Finster.

" Oh do'nt start" said Dorothy's mother. Then Mr.Finster noticed Dorothy.

" hey Dorothy remember me" he said as he nearly chuckled. Dorothy smiled.

" Ok" began Mr. Finster, " just set your things inside, I got a whole bunch of cookies from the Bakery".

Dorothy then walked in with her suit case in hand. Once out she was inside, Dorothy's mother said " well thanks again for taking her in mr.Finster".

"heh, No problem" said mr. Finster as he and Dorothy's mother hugged each other good bye.

"oh and mr. Finster" said Dorothy's mother, " if you're going to tell Dorothy about ... THEM, be careful while doing so". Mr. Finster gave a soft smile.

"do'nt worry, I always am, besides, considering her age, she's got to know"




(I know, this is a short chapter, but the next chapter will be longer and you'll learn who Dorothy's mother and mr. Finster are talking about)





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Chapter 3




Inside the apartment, Dorothy sat at Mr. Finsters table helping herself to the cookies he bought. Then Mr.Finster took a seat on the other side of the table.

"so" began Mr.Finster, " heard you and your new friend went to the Fantasmic show Lastnight".

"Yeah" replied Dorothy.

" that must've been some experience you had there at the near end with the dragon, and when it turned to you when you were cheering for mic', it looked more realistic to you did'nt it".

Hearing this caught Dorothy's ears, how could the old imagineer have known that. "yeah, how did you know that Mr.Finster?" asked Dorothy.

"because..., I know something thats behind it, and what I know contains somethings that you should definately know" said Mr. Finster.

"Um, Okay" said Dorothy.

"Now" began the old imagineer " you see Dorothy, there are not just cast member characters here, but there are also real disney Characters, and I mean REAL Disney characters that secretly roam the magic kingdom!".

"Really, but how?" asked Dorothy who was amazed at this.

" By Disney magic, to them this park is their sanctuary, and you see Dorothy, human children like you are what keep them alive in a way, or as I like to call it 'Last long'. A human childs laughter and Belief, it's all why Mickey Mouse is still the character he is, and why Peter Pan is able to deafeat Captain Hook, and why Hercules is evrer so strong. However there are certain characters that children like you should avoid, the Disney Villains, now you may want to pay attention to this, because you're about to learn why that Villain mountain ride was never opened".

Dorothy looked out the window and saw the very tip of the mountain from it's distance. Then she turned her face to Mr. Finster's to hear this part of the story.

"Now, even when both of your parents just started working here, I told them about this whole thing too, so that they would beware" began Mr.Finster, " you see, unlike the Good Characters, it is a human childs Fear and youthful instincts that make the Villains last long and ever more powerful, and the leader of all the Villains is no other than Maleficent, Disney's most evilest witch in creation. To last long is one of the things all the Villains want most, and they even resort to KIDNAP a human child where ever they can find one. Infact, when the Villain ride was fully built and ready to be opened, I was the one who convinced the head of the imagineering department not to open it".

"Why" asked Drothy who now figured that this may be the cause of the child disapearences in the park.

"because" said Mr.Finster, " knowing that the Villains are real and that the ride is about them, it would lead to more child disapearences and many other obvious reasons, so thats when the plans to open the ride were officialy called off, then we decided to use the ride as a prison for the Villains and every villain to come, and with the help of the good characters we put all the Villains in there, and locked the gates while the magical good characters put a special spell on the gates, all so the villains would not get out to snatch anymore children, and since then, the Villains had a HUGE grudge against us imagineers".

"Did they ever try to go after you because of what you did" asked Dorothy.

Then Mr. Finster showed her his right fore arm, revealing a bunch of burns and four straight scratches, scratches that one would recieve from finger nails.

Dorothy gently touched the burns and the scratches then said " last time I saw you, I thought you said that was from an accident".

" Oh it was" said Mr. Finster, " and a VERY Unpleasant accident I assure you, infact its one of the very things about the Villains, when they give you a mark, it stays with you forever, anyways, though despite the ride being locked up, the villains still manage to roam the park, and I think that theres a way of how they're doing so, for one thing it's not through the gate, it's possible that they are using a special passage way, infact just about a few years ago, I traveled to every Disney park in the world to find that passage way, but I never found it. Also, sometimes the villains travel in disguise, but because we're in DisneyLand, disguises are not neccessary. though one way you can Identify a real Villain would be if you're Vision is sharp enough to notice something unnatural about their eyes".

"Like what?" asked Dorothy.

" Well their eyes glowing in the colors of eyes in their films, colors consisting of Yellow replacing the white in the eye, or the color of the eye being either bright Green, Red, Or Purple" explained the old man.

"you know, when both of your parents were on their honeymoon, I knew a girl who was I'd say about.. 2 years younger than you, named Rebecca who was taken by the Villains. Rebecca had very caring and protective parents, but even that did not save Rebecca, cause when the Villains choose a young victom the only hope of escaping is by knowing everything abotu them That I am telling you. *sigh* and poor Rebecca. Ther was a big search for her, but hwen the Villains are done obsurbing a child, and despite that some of them are known to be experts with weoponry, the villains Do'nt MURDER their obsurbed victoms with knives, swords, or guns, thats how humans get caught, and, with the exception of us imagineers and the good characters, the villains Never get caught. For a full month evryone searched the park, the matenence, the staff, us imagineers, the cast members, even the good characters themselves, but there was no sign of Rebecca, It was as though she completely disapeared from the face of the earth. I felt horrible for her parents, I was their best friend at the time, so I tried to help keep their hopes alive by giving them a special tour behind the dolls of 'It's a small world', but when we got to a certain country, Rebecca's Father noticed something about one of the dolls and walked toward them. He looked as though he had seen a GHOST, I was curious, but then I saw what he saw, one of the dolls looked like, then I figured, It Was Rebecca, as a doll, gazing at us".

"I Do'nt believe it, she got turned into a doll in the ride and you saw it?" asked Dorothy in amazment.

"Many Times, and yes, I believe the Villains enchanted her in the ride" replied Mr.Finster, "And the strange thing was that each day, she'd be found in a different country, like oneday she'd be in england and the next she'd be in France, and so on and so forth, I asked matenence if they moved her, but they all told me that she was where she was when they left. I tried to see how she did it. At night once, I pulled out a chair and sat infront of the doll, and just when I thought I'd be able to see how she is moving, I fell asleep when the clock striked three, and in the next morning she was in a different country in the ride. Then as the years went by, Rebecca started to act the way all autioananmatronics act when they are getting old, then not to long ago, Rebecca was nowhere in the ride to be found, Iasked matenence, but they told me what they 've been telling me for years, she was there when they left".

"Did she die, did the Villains do something with her again?" asked Dorothy.

But Mr. Finster said "Only Walt in heaven above knows, afterall, many Strange things happen when you are dealing with the Villains."

"Is there anything else to know about the villains, Mr.Finster?" asked Dorothy.

"just one more thing" replied the old imagineer, " the Villains have a very highly developed sense of smell, meant for tracking down children. Infact a Villain could smell you no more than 12 feet away".

"they could never smell me" said Dorothy, "I wash every day".

"Oh yes they could, thats what they want you to think" said Mr.Finster, "but the cleaner you are the more the Villains can smell you".

"um, you kind of lost me there Mr.Finster" said Dorothy.

"well to make it less confusing" said the old man, "a dirty child its the dirt they smell, but when it's a clean child it's the child".

Dorothy now understood what he meant, "woah.., so the Villains could smell me right now?".

"To me you smell like you just came out of one of the candyshops, but to the Villains you'd smell more like money".

"Money?" asked Dorothy, "why Money?".

" Nobody really knows, but I think that because they're beings consumed by all the sins, I think it has abit of effects, so if someone familiar sniffs the air near you and gets a greedy look on his or her face as they pass by you, they might be one of the Villains"

"WOW" Dorothy thought to herself after hearing all of this






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Chapter 4



Then there was a knock on the door. Mr.Finster got up to get it, and when he opened it there stood the Real Goofy holding something.

" h'yuck, Good Mornin' Mr. Finster!" he said.

Dorothy smiled in amazment.

"Good day Goofy" said Mr.Finster as he let Goofy in.

Goofy then noticed Dorothy and smiled and tipped his hat, "Good mornin' to ya too, little girl!".

" oh yes, Goofy, this is Dorothy, Dorothy Archer" introduced Mr.Finster. Goofy's eyes widened with realization.

" Archer, as in Rick Archer?!" asked Goofy as they both nodded.

Then Goofy smiled and took Dorothy's hand to shake it, " Nice to finally meetcha' Dorothy, before your dad left he told us about ya".

Dorothy smiled at the thought that her father was well acquainted with the characters themselves.

" Oh an' I almost forgot, I brought'cha an one of Minnies apple pies" claimed Goofy.

"just set it down on the table" said Mr.Finster as Goofy did so.

"Well I gottah get back home, bye Mr.Finster, Bye Dorothy" said Goofy as he left.

Then Mr. Finster and Dorothy began to help themselves with some of Minnies pie. Dorothy immediately loved it, "mmm, Minnie sure is a good baker, this pie is delicious".

But before Mr.Finster could even have one bite of the pie, he started to grow week and tired, then he was resting his head on the table,and was to week to move.

"Mr. Finster, whats wrong?" asked Dorothy who got up and checked his pulse which was alright, "Mr.Finster?".

Then he weakly spoke, "Dorothy, go to the first kitchen drawer by the phone and call dr. Sweet".

"As in Sweet from 'Atlantis'?" asked Dorothy while the old imagineer nodded.


Once Sweet arrived things got much better.

" Alright, the Old man has a certain case of Diabetes" said Sweet.

"How bad is it?" asked Dorothy.

"Well, knowing how serious Diabetes can be, the Old man can definately consider himself Lucky, he has a very VERY tiny case of it, so if he follows my prescription he'll should be as healthy as a horse" said Sweet.

"you hear that Mr.Finster, you're gonnah be better" Dorothy said to Mr.Finster who was awake and lying on his bed smiling that his case of Diabetes was the oppisite of
of serious.

" Alright Mr.Finster, Im gonnah have to put you on a Sugar-free Diet, No Cake, No Candy includin' Halloween Candy, No Cookies, No pie, Nothin' with Sugar at all. That and some pills to take, and Like I said soon you'll be as healthy as a horse".

Sweet gave Mr.Finster the pills he needed and packed up his medical bag then turned to Dorothy, " And do'nt you worry kid, he'll be back on his feet by tomorrow mornin'!".

" Thanks Sweet" said Dorothy.

" No problem, and it's a pleasure ta finally meet Ricks kid" said Sweet as he shook her hand and left.

Mr.Finster stretched out his arms and yawned, " Im sorry if this case scared you Dorothy".

"It's alright Mr. Finster, it was'nt your fault" said Dorothy, " can I go back to having the pie now?".

"Sure go ahead, I can't have it anymore" said Mr. Finster, "besides, I need to rest anway".

"okay Mr.Finster" said Dorothy as she went to the kitchen to have some more pie.


The next Morning, when Dorthy got dressed and walked into the Kitchen, she was abit surprized to see Mr.Finster back on his feet making breakfast.

"Did'nt expect me to up, huh" he said chuckling.

After breakfast, Mr.Finster just decided to relax in his arm chair. "so what're you going to do today?" he asked Dorothy.

" Im going to go around the park" said Dorothy.

"Okay, just be careful, and remember what I told you about the Villains" said Mr.Finster.

"Do'nt worry I will" said Dorothy as she headed towards the door, "just do'nt lock me out".

" I promise I wo'nt" said Mr.Finster as Dorothy made her way out.

Then Mr.Finster got comfortable in his chair. To Mr. Finster, Dorothy was already like a grand daughter to him.




(the next chapter is garaunteed to possibly have you guy's at the edge of your seats)







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